Comments received on poems by Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)
Caterpillar sits ( poem with my sister ‘ rainbow ‘
Mario Piedra said:
May your spiritual caterpillar
realizes is already a beautiful
rainbow like butterfly
So fly to eternity to be one
where the sounds of silence
are elocuente and the symphony
of life shows it’s true nature….
July 25th, 2023 20:42
Mario Piedra said:
May your spiritual caterpillar
realizes is already a beautiful
rainbow like butterfly
So fly to eternity to be one
where the sounds of silence
are elocuente and the symphony
of life shows it’s true nature….
July 25th, 2023 20:42
Caterpillar sits ( poem with my sister ‘ rainbow ‘
Mario Piedra said:
May your spiritual caterpillar
realizes is already a beautiful
rainbow like butterfly
So fly to eternity to be one
where the sounds of silence
are elocuente and the symphony
of life shows it’s true nature….
July 25th, 2023 13:29
Mario Piedra said:
May your spiritual caterpillar
realizes is already a beautiful
rainbow like butterfly
So fly to eternity to be one
where the sounds of silence
are elocuente and the symphony
of life shows it’s true nature….
July 25th, 2023 13:29
Caterpillar sits ( poem with my sister ‘ rainbow ‘
L. B. Mek said:
\'but today there are tiny feet
under her body
that shine like a green forest\'
so gentle, so beautiful
this a poetry balm, soothing
our aches in life
just lovely, thank you dear Poet
(i always wished I had a younger sibling)
July 21st, 2023 02:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'but today there are tiny feet
under her body
that shine like a green forest\'
so gentle, so beautiful
this a poetry balm, soothing
our aches in life
just lovely, thank you dear Poet
(i always wished I had a younger sibling)
July 21st, 2023 02:58
Caterpillar sits ( poem with my sister ‘ rainbow ‘
Bobby O said:
I really liked this. And how cool are caterpillars?
July 20th, 2023 16:23
Bobby O said:
I really liked this. And how cool are caterpillars?
July 20th, 2023 16:23
Caterpillar sits ( poem with my sister ‘ rainbow ‘
sonal monhyung said:
This is amazing!
July 20th, 2023 13:28
sonal monhyung said:
This is amazing!
July 20th, 2023 13:28
Caterpillar sits ( poem with my sister ‘ rainbow ‘
sonal monhyung said:
You are a great nature lover and your poems can push anybody fall in love with it .
July 20th, 2023 13:27
sonal monhyung said:
You are a great nature lover and your poems can push anybody fall in love with it .
July 20th, 2023 13:27
Caterpillar sits ( poem with my sister ‘ rainbow ‘
orchidee said:
That\'s a lot of pairs of shoes/slippers she needs! Good write V.
July 20th, 2023 13:24
orchidee said:
That\'s a lot of pairs of shoes/slippers she needs! Good write V.
July 20th, 2023 13:24
A pigeon sits
Goldfinch60 said:
We hear woodpigeons every morning when we awake, it is an uplifting sound.
Andy
July 20th, 2023 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
We hear woodpigeons every morning when we awake, it is an uplifting sound.
Andy
July 20th, 2023 00:39
A pigeon sits
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you have used white to convey the feeling of peace in this poem. So many mornings on my walk I hear the gentle cooing of a mourning dove, so lovely and soft. Once again your imagery is splendid!
July 19th, 2023 12:16
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you have used white to convey the feeling of peace in this poem. So many mornings on my walk I hear the gentle cooing of a mourning dove, so lovely and soft. Once again your imagery is splendid!
July 19th, 2023 12:16
A pigeon sits
orchidee said:
A fine write V.
I wish little children wouldn\'t scare them away.
I kept thinking a pigeon was on a roof each morning. But it was an air-conditioning thingy! Doh!
July 19th, 2023 09:52
orchidee said:
A fine write V.
I wish little children wouldn\'t scare them away.
I kept thinking a pigeon was on a roof each morning. But it was an air-conditioning thingy! Doh!
July 19th, 2023 09:52
Red shoes
MendedFences27 said:
Welcome back. Did you click your heels together to get here? A refreshing take on shoes to start my day. Good one. - Phil A.
July 18th, 2023 11:10
MendedFences27 said:
Welcome back. Did you click your heels together to get here? A refreshing take on shoes to start my day. Good one. - Phil A.
July 18th, 2023 11:10
Umbrella
shivpoetesspriya said:
This poem, named Umbrella, is lovely and inspiring. It captures the essence of how we should all strive to be like an umbrella, accepting and caring for all the emotions and experiences that come our way, even the ones that may be difficult or sad. The imagery of the rain and the Umbrella is so vivid and poignant, reminding us that sometimes we must weather the storm to see the sunshine. And through it all, we can provide comfort and support to those around us, just like an umbrella sheltering us from the rain. Let us all strive to be like this Umbrella, helping to turn the loud notes of the rain into the smiling sun.
July 18th, 2023 10:40
shivpoetesspriya said:
This poem, named Umbrella, is lovely and inspiring. It captures the essence of how we should all strive to be like an umbrella, accepting and caring for all the emotions and experiences that come our way, even the ones that may be difficult or sad. The imagery of the rain and the Umbrella is so vivid and poignant, reminding us that sometimes we must weather the storm to see the sunshine. And through it all, we can provide comfort and support to those around us, just like an umbrella sheltering us from the rain. Let us all strive to be like this Umbrella, helping to turn the loud notes of the rain into the smiling sun.
July 18th, 2023 10:40
Red shoes
Neville said:
glad you changed your mind .. it\'s a woman\'s prerogative or so I\'m told ..
July 18th, 2023 05:33
Neville said:
glad you changed your mind .. it\'s a woman\'s prerogative or so I\'m told ..
July 18th, 2023 05:33
Umbrella
MendedFences27 said:
One umbrella in a rainstorm can only do so much. It can\'t handle the entire deluge.
A very nice poem giving an umbrella life like qualities and a caring heart. I enjoyed it. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2023 18:18
MendedFences27 said:
One umbrella in a rainstorm can only do so much. It can\'t handle the entire deluge.
A very nice poem giving an umbrella life like qualities and a caring heart. I enjoyed it. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2023 18:18
Umbrella
L. B. Mek said:
we all need to realise such umbrella\'s in our life
a lovely read, intimate and tender
thank you! dear Poet
hope you have a nice break
July 14th, 2023 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
we all need to realise such umbrella\'s in our life
a lovely read, intimate and tender
thank you! dear Poet
hope you have a nice break
July 14th, 2023 04:18
Umbrella
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet the imagery of this poem is priceless. You have described beautifully the interplay between emotional opposites in our lives. We need both to live fully as sentient beings. Incredible!
July 12th, 2023 13:04
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet the imagery of this poem is priceless. You have described beautifully the interplay between emotional opposites in our lives. We need both to live fully as sentient beings. Incredible!
July 12th, 2023 13:04
A blue chair sits
Pop64 said:
wonderfully vivid, you\'ve made the color-blind man see.
July 12th, 2023 12:32
Pop64 said:
wonderfully vivid, you\'ve made the color-blind man see.
July 12th, 2023 12:32
Umbrella
Neville said:
I often feel like I am an umbrella pretending to be a shield .. trying to protect them .. keeping people warm, safe and dry .. I guess that\'s the nature of my work .. and as far as your authors note is concerned, I think there is a very important message contained within it .. Neville :)
July 12th, 2023 03:03
Neville said:
I often feel like I am an umbrella pretending to be a shield .. trying to protect them .. keeping people warm, safe and dry .. I guess that\'s the nature of my work .. and as far as your authors note is concerned, I think there is a very important message contained within it .. Neville :)
July 12th, 2023 03:03
Umbrella
Teddy.15 said:
At the moment it\'s 40c here in Florence and I shall tell you dear.rose you have cooled me.down with your imagery I could almost feel the soft rain. 💖
July 12th, 2023 02:54
Teddy.15 said:
At the moment it\'s 40c here in Florence and I shall tell you dear.rose you have cooled me.down with your imagery I could almost feel the soft rain. 💖
July 12th, 2023 02:54
Umbrella
orchidee said:
I got all wet, cos I didn\'t want the umbrella to get wet. She didn\'t fancy getting drenched. Doh! lol.
July 12th, 2023 02:14
orchidee said:
I got all wet, cos I didn\'t want the umbrella to get wet. She didn\'t fancy getting drenched. Doh! lol.
July 12th, 2023 02:14
Grass sits quietly with friends
peto said:
Knocked another nature write out of the park
Although get completely what Teddy said
Clever
July 11th, 2023 10:39
peto said:
Knocked another nature write out of the park
Although get completely what Teddy said
Clever
July 11th, 2023 10:39
A blue chair sits
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Beautiful colors, Vb. Love the personification as well.
July 11th, 2023 09:07
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Beautiful colors, Vb. Love the personification as well.
July 11th, 2023 09:07
Grass sits quietly with friends
orchidee said:
Good write V.
It\'s a \'snail-saving\' day for me. Well, they come out on damp mornings. I put them on to a piece of grass or garden. It must be like crossing the motorway for them to cross the pavement.
July 11th, 2023 03:54
orchidee said:
Good write V.
It\'s a \'snail-saving\' day for me. Well, they come out on damp mornings. I put them on to a piece of grass or garden. It must be like crossing the motorway for them to cross the pavement.
July 11th, 2023 03:54
Grass sits quietly with friends
Teddy.15 said:
I see a huge metaphor in here. Even having one safe person in our lives is a quality not all have ❤️
July 11th, 2023 03:50
Teddy.15 said:
I see a huge metaphor in here. Even having one safe person in our lives is a quality not all have ❤️
July 11th, 2023 03:50
A blue chair sits
Neville said:
quite possibly my favourite colour & made me smile too 💙
July 10th, 2023 05:43
Neville said:
quite possibly my favourite colour & made me smile too 💙
July 10th, 2023 05:43
Yellow butterfly
L. B. Mek said:
\'a butterfly is made of smiles\'
beautiful imagery, dear Poet
thank you!
July 10th, 2023 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'a butterfly is made of smiles\'
beautiful imagery, dear Poet
thank you!
July 10th, 2023 04:13
A blue chair sits
L. B. Mek said:
we must end chair brutality
i totally agree! lol
(in all seriousness another wonderfully
thought provoking read, dear Poet
thank you)
July 10th, 2023 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
we must end chair brutality
i totally agree! lol
(in all seriousness another wonderfully
thought provoking read, dear Poet
thank you)
July 10th, 2023 04:12
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