Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Endless
L. B. Mek said:
I recognise these words of frustration
penned succinctly poetic by you
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(sometimes, it seems our world
is full \'of lover\'s without love\'
and \'humanist peace seekers
devoid of a night\'s decent rest\'
as if
in our very questing for the calm rivers
in existence\'s chaotic seas
fate paths a far more ominous journey
for us to earn the wisdom, we seek.)
October 24th, 2022 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
I recognise these words of frustration
penned succinctly poetic by you
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(sometimes, it seems our world
is full \'of lover\'s without love\'
and \'humanist peace seekers
devoid of a night\'s decent rest\'
as if
in our very questing for the calm rivers
in existence\'s chaotic seas
fate paths a far more ominous journey
for us to earn the wisdom, we seek.)
October 24th, 2022 03:45
Napkins
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure all will be well before that pack is empty.
Andy
December 6th, 2021 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure all will be well before that pack is empty.
Andy
December 6th, 2021 01:56
Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Like yourself all day through Jabberwocky it is well worth it.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Like yourself all day through Jabberwocky it is well worth it.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:43
Blackest Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
May the pages of your book now lead you to a wonderful chapter in your life Jabberwocky.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
May the pages of your book now lead you to a wonderful chapter in your life Jabberwocky.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:28
Dragonslayer
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one J, and thank you for my first laugh of the day.
Andy
May 22nd, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one J, and thank you for my first laugh of the day.
Andy
May 22nd, 2021 00:43
Shadow
L. B. Mek said:
\'So our love then; a beach
we danced across,
leaving not a footprint.\'
\'It is me standing now
Facing dusk
Anchoring my long shadow.\'
wonderfully paced poetry, accessibly worded
thanks for sharing
May 7th, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'So our love then; a beach
we danced across,
leaving not a footprint.\'
\'It is me standing now
Facing dusk
Anchoring my long shadow.\'
wonderfully paced poetry, accessibly worded
thanks for sharing
May 7th, 2021 05:27
Shadow
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I like the prickly nature imagery that you use to convey and express your muse. Its a great wry lament in metaphor. Kudos!!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 7th, 2021 02:30
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I like the prickly nature imagery that you use to convey and express your muse. Its a great wry lament in metaphor. Kudos!!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 7th, 2021 02:30
Shadow
Goldfinch60 said:
As dusk falls and the darkness descends remember that that darkness will become light in the new day.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
As dusk falls and the darkness descends remember that that darkness will become light in the new day.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:36
Shadow
rosiedm said:
I like this it makes me think of the fire over here in co.down mourne mountains 2 weekends ago how it burnt for 2 days or more ..I wish it could of been longer I\'m awful about longer poems I think its because all the great poets write pages of one poem .. and I write longer too (Im okay not great) 😁
May 6th, 2021 13:15
rosiedm said:
I like this it makes me think of the fire over here in co.down mourne mountains 2 weekends ago how it burnt for 2 days or more ..I wish it could of been longer I\'m awful about longer poems I think its because all the great poets write pages of one poem .. and I write longer too (Im okay not great) 😁
May 6th, 2021 13:15
“Dusky”
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is within each other and has no boundaries.
Andy
April 17th, 2021 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is within each other and has no boundaries.
Andy
April 17th, 2021 00:41
Dirty Shoes
RDS said:
Haha nice Jabberwocky, fun with some undertones. You don\'t often see many poems about poo. Probably because we\'re all told you can\'t polish a turd. But thank you here we see you\'ve rolled it in Glitter!
November 23rd, 2020 16:01
RDS said:
Haha nice Jabberwocky, fun with some undertones. You don\'t often see many poems about poo. Probably because we\'re all told you can\'t polish a turd. But thank you here we see you\'ve rolled it in Glitter!
November 23rd, 2020 16:01
Dirty Shoes
L. B. Mek said:
great read,
I gravitate to the fun element you added (deliberately or not) to what is usually a dour topic
November 23rd, 2020 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
great read,
I gravitate to the fun element you added (deliberately or not) to what is usually a dour topic
November 23rd, 2020 04:03
Dirty Shoes
Goldfinch60 said:
When walking in your cleaned shoes just be careful where you put your feet.
Andy
November 23rd, 2020 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
When walking in your cleaned shoes just be careful where you put your feet.
Andy
November 23rd, 2020 01:20
Sand
Goldfinch60 said:
You are so write J, time is the most precious gift we can give or receive from anybody.
Andy
October 12th, 2020 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
You are so write J, time is the most precious gift we can give or receive from anybody.
Andy
October 12th, 2020 00:22
Bitter Lullaby
Lorna said:
I\'m sorry,,,,, this was so funny. I\'ve been absent for quite a while and this is my first poem read of the day. You haven\'t changed a bit.
September 30th, 2020 09:37
Lorna said:
I\'m sorry,,,,, this was so funny. I\'ve been absent for quite a while and this is my first poem read of the day. You haven\'t changed a bit.
September 30th, 2020 09:37
Brief Encounter
Goldfinch60 said:
It certainly appears to be time to go Jabberwocky. Fun write.
Andy
September 8th, 2020 04:17
Goldfinch60 said:
It certainly appears to be time to go Jabberwocky. Fun write.
Andy
September 8th, 2020 04:17
Brief Encounter
L. B. Mek said:
lol, humour is a virtuous kindness when penning
those bitter-pill opinions
September 8th, 2020 03:37
L. B. Mek said:
lol, humour is a virtuous kindness when penning
those bitter-pill opinions
September 8th, 2020 03:37
Kismet
Goldfinch60 said:
One day they will find the one that is for them and them alone.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
One day they will find the one that is for them and them alone.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 00:21
Recidivist
Goldfinch60 said:
That love was there once, remember those good times.
Andy
July 9th, 2020 00:00
Goldfinch60 said:
That love was there once, remember those good times.
Andy
July 9th, 2020 00:00
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