Comments on community poems by SerenWise
- When Duty Calls (Neville)
A beautiful sentiment wrapped in a lovely rhyme
April 22nd, 2019 12:37 - LETTING GO. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful, so simple and meaningful. Nicely written :)
April 18th, 2019 14:40 - Harbour Side (Neville)
Beautifully sensual and personal imagery, nicely done
April 18th, 2019 14:37 - Winter Solstice (Aislinn Wilson)
very emotive, beautiful :)
April 17th, 2019 20:59 - Subsumed (Dovestoneboy)
Nicely written
April 17th, 2019 12:56 - Turn Toward the Window (Neville)
Very emotional and elegantly written, well done
April 17th, 2019 12:35 - Another New Day (Neville)
Beautifully written and full of hope, nicely done
April 16th, 2019 19:02 - Tis Only Angels Crying (Neville)
Nice little piece, makes you think...
April 15th, 2019 14:40 - MAGICAL. (Fay Slimm.)
Gorgeous words and use of metaphor, I think everyone who has been in a...
April 15th, 2019 14:39 - Names and Faces (Reivax Camlost)
Nicely written complex piece, very emotive
April 12th, 2019 12:04 - La Petit Mort (Neville)
Lovely erotic piece, I\'ve always loved the term \'la petit mort\'
April 12th, 2019 11:44 - Morning Coffee (Neville)
Nice reflective piece, very emotive
April 11th, 2019 11:20 - Shadow Envy (Neville)
Very poignant, nicely done
April 10th, 2019 15:05 - Canvas (Neville)
Interesting little write
April 9th, 2019 12:35 - Roadside Irises (Sunshinefalling)
Lovely write
April 8th, 2019 23:37 - Poppies (Neville)
Beautifully written, well done
April 8th, 2019 13:10 - Dark stranger (Amherrera1190)
Love this piece, great ending!
April 7th, 2019 17:40 - Eventide (Moordykspot2)
Beautiful use of language, nicely written
April 7th, 2019 16:26 - Ballerina (Neville)
Thought provoking piece, love the ending
April 6th, 2019 12:57 - Feel Again (SheWasTheSun)
Nicely written evocative piece
April 6th, 2019 12:56 - HITHER. (Fay Slimm.)
Very well written piece, nice use of archaic language
April 6th, 2019 11:04 - Glitter (Brie)
Nicely written
April 5th, 2019 10:43 - Whisper of Leaves (Dead Naked Tree)
Nice to see you here :p
April 5th, 2019 10:24 - Our Lady of the Harbour (Neville)
Beautifully written! Very evocative and enjoyable read.
April 5th, 2019 10:23 - A Thirst Well Quenched (Neville)
I really enjoyed this, simplicity in perfection.
April 4th, 2019 12:41 - Read Yourself (Neville)
Lovely words
April 4th, 2019 12:13 - Three Little Words (SerenWise)
Thank you all!
April 3rd, 2019 22:31 - Before Breakfast (Neville)
Lovely simple write
March 30th, 2019 08:39 - Upon Your Return (Notapoet)
Beautifully written
March 19th, 2019 16:50 - How Else Would We Know? (Nicholas Browning)
Nicely written
March 19th, 2019 00:43 - Princess (Night Owl)
Beautifully written
March 17th, 2019 23:57 - No more shelter (Sylviasearcher)
beautifully written, lovely imagery
March 16th, 2019 12:46 - As Hollows Whisper (Nicholas Browning)
Very enjoyable, great use of rhyme and metaphor
March 14th, 2019 10:22 - Perhaps (Sylviasearcher)
Nicely written!
March 14th, 2019 10:19 - Mourning Song (Neville)
Nicely written
March 13th, 2019 14:05 - Better Let Me Love You (Lizzie)
beautifully written!
March 12th, 2019 17:40 - Scarlett Point (Hedy)
Very expressive write!
March 9th, 2019 17:39 - View: The Living Room Window, and Birds (Hedy)
Very endearing and creatively written :)
March 4th, 2019 17:59 - One Bird, Two Stones (Wi11ow)
Really nicely written, love the use of formatting :)
March 3rd, 2019 17:01 - The Last Hurt (Neville)
Nicely written, very personal feel
March 2nd, 2019 11:19 - Me and you, on and on... (Sylviasearcher)
Very powerful write
March 1st, 2019 17:31 - New Skin (aka Transportation) (Hedy)
Very nicely written piece, good rhythm
March 1st, 2019 17:27 - Sex (Brie)
Nicely written :)
March 1st, 2019 13:17 - Zephyr (Hpoetry)
Really nicely written, great cadence and rhythm
February 28th, 2019 16:54 - Bring Along a Lantern (Neville)
Very nicely written, beautiful imagery
February 27th, 2019 14:10 - Reconfigure it out (Neville)
Very nicely formatted, clever
February 27th, 2019 14:04 - Weak (Traw)
Nice little write
February 27th, 2019 14:02 - Venom (Amherrera1190)
Beautiful and emotive prose
February 22nd, 2019 15:46 - Ink spots and paper snowballs (Andrew Charles Forrest)
This is lovely! Very well written and relatable
February 22nd, 2019 08:46 - Spring (Sylviasearcher)
Beautifully written, lovely imagery :)
February 21st, 2019 18:11 - Land of No More Shadow (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Beautifully written!
February 21st, 2019 18:10 - Heathen (Neville)
I love this! very evocative imagery, really nicely written :)
February 21st, 2019 18:09 - The Sea Captain (ColorsToSpare)
Sorrowful and beautiful!
February 21st, 2019 17:46 - With The Stroke of My Pen (Daydreaming)
Nicely written :)
February 20th, 2019 16:53 - Taken (Sylviasearcher)
beautifully written, nice use of language and rhymes :)
February 20th, 2019 16:52 - Shield Maiden (Neville)
This is awesome, I love the use of language and metaphor! Good job :)
February 19th, 2019 17:37 - Foxes Are Special (W c)
Nicely written, foxes are wonderful creatures!
February 18th, 2019 16:59 - Dreamcaught (Noah)
Lovely writing
February 18th, 2019 03:04 - You Find Your Purpose (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Nicely written :)
February 17th, 2019 19:21 - Gone (Mo_Elizabeth)
Very interesting write, well done
February 17th, 2019 19:16 - Oblivion (Clark)
Lovely work
February 16th, 2019 21:45 - the sailor with a drowned future (Jon Nakapalau)
Interesting write
February 16th, 2019 15:55 - Pebble (Sylviasearcher)
This is stunningly written... I can really relate to it as well. Nicely...
February 16th, 2019 14:21 - Hands of a Guy (Shadows)
Very thought-provoking and well written
February 16th, 2019 11:24 - A Handful of Ghosts (Neville)
This is very thought-provoking, nicely done
February 16th, 2019 11:06 - Nothing (Dovestoneboy)
Beautifully written, I love the creative use of metaphor
February 15th, 2019 18:06 - Pride (Shadows)
This is really poignant, well done!
February 15th, 2019 18:04 - Cartography of Lost Desire (Jon Nakapalau)
Nicely written, well done
February 15th, 2019 18:02 - Come closer (Sbon87)
Very beautiful and erotic language, well done
February 14th, 2019 17:04 - No Umbrella (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very nicely written
February 14th, 2019 17:01 - Stargaze (Noah)
Beautiful write!
February 14th, 2019 14:31 - Locusts (Amherrera1190)
This is great, I love the metaphor
February 13th, 2019 19:09 - Secret Imitations (JaydeVictoria)
Lovely work
February 12th, 2019 17:53 - Those Nights (Amherrera1190)
Nicely written prose
February 12th, 2019 15:43 - Sunset Hair (Lee Renard Caspian)
Lovely imagery, very well written
February 12th, 2019 14:05 - Perfection in person (IsraaD)
Lovely write and great use of formatting
February 10th, 2019 19:13 - The Void (Syd)
Very well written, well done
February 9th, 2019 12:22 - Brown Eyes (Luckykarma)
This is precious
February 9th, 2019 11:16 - I LOVE YOU (Shayl)
Love this!
February 8th, 2019 15:36 - I Am Living (DesertWords)
Lovely work!
February 6th, 2019 15:56 - The Hunter (CindyB)
This is beautifully written! Well done on the rhyming :)
February 5th, 2019 00:29 - Shadows in the dark (Adamlong86)
Very powerful imagery - hope you\'re ok!
February 4th, 2019 19:46 - O She! (Surucipe)
Nicely written
February 3rd, 2019 23:48 - The Pissed Optimist (Surucipe)
Interesting write
February 3rd, 2019 23:47 - Not Yet (Hidden)
Interesting work, well done
February 3rd, 2019 23:06 - You Are Enough (GON)
This is beautiful, so well written
February 3rd, 2019 11:14 - Ink Blots (Neville)
Lovely imagery in this piece, well done
February 3rd, 2019 11:12 - In Vacuum (Satishverma)
Nice imagery
February 2nd, 2019 21:14 - The Sparrow (CindyB)
Beautiful imagery
February 2nd, 2019 17:26 - The East (Dovestoneboy)
Beautiful imagery, well written!
February 2nd, 2019 17:21 - Gold Roses (Joanna Garrido)
Lovely imagery
February 2nd, 2019 17:20
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