Comments on community poems by Bobby O
- BLACK DYNAMITE (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Reminds of Oriental Theater Chicago
Slaughter
Foxy Brown
Cleopatra...
May 21st, 2023 01:46 - Time Has an Expiration Date (Naught Art)
I peel off my layers
Strong phrase that balances the whole piece. Nice...
May 21st, 2023 01:37 - The Dawning Grace. (David Wakeling)
It is a nice trip and a very important message delivered. I like your...
May 21st, 2023 01:35 - Gratitude For Where We Are. (Goldfinch60)
Nice message and Perfect to adorn it with Bobby Darin. Wondering if the...
May 21st, 2023 01:11 - Gratitude For Where We Are. (Goldfinch60)
Nice message and Perfect to adorn it with Bobby Darin. Wondering if the...
May 21st, 2023 01:06 - All Good Things (Neville)
On sea on land in the air. It’s like a continuum , a rainbow if not...
May 21st, 2023 00:50 - Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain (Parisab)
It certainly hit me hard when I first heard and of course I’m still...
May 21st, 2023 00:18 - Zero (ChangeByGrace)
It’s extra cool that a tactile experience applies so readily as a...
May 21st, 2023 00:10 - Angels of night (Arial)
Too used to these strings
Great line. It says so many things and...
May 21st, 2023 00:06 - Shy Twice & Cliche\' No Longer (Introverted Sage)
It’s cool that you showed this interest
Much respect.
May 18th, 2023 02:37 - Shy Twice & Cliche\' No Longer (Introverted Sage)
It’s cool that you showed this interest
Much respect.
May 18th, 2023 02:37 - Tall Trees, Standing Still (Noveyre)
Nice write. You , I’m sure, have reasons or a plan to leave the rancor...
May 17th, 2023 23:30 - Thank You (Myaf0307)
Sincerity beats out fancy every time.
May 17th, 2023 23:22 - The EDS Diaries: Midnight Prayers (ChronicallyAnya)
Yearning to be free is active and coalescence snf staying in the battle...
May 17th, 2023 20:48 - Prey of the Odds. (Vairabhiana)
You had me until the last two lines All along I tried to stay w you as...
May 17th, 2023 19:38 - Anticipation (Kimberly)
And BTW, just noticed you were born on a magical day as the announcement...
May 17th, 2023 18:48 - Anticipation (Kimberly)
You have now reset the bar and I’m hopeful I may meet a charismatic lady...
May 17th, 2023 18:44 - Failure Rise Up (Dev Parth)
A stepping stone indeed. “The credit belongs to the man who is actually...
May 17th, 2023 07:58 - A Handful of Monsters (Neville)
In Chicago , certain guys would plan to take that one guy on a tour of a...
May 17th, 2023 02:34 - One In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Power.
May 17th, 2023 02:31 - Faces in Shadows (Keith Jeffries)
Really nice. “Purposeful gait of intent”
“Welcome the night...
May 16th, 2023 14:12 - Lost Among the Crowd (Mara \"Marzipan\")
That’s a real nice piece. You took special care w the phrasing avoiding...
May 16th, 2023 14:08 - A perfect date doesn’t exi- (Serene)
Nice write. I wish I could Bron a date like that.
May 16th, 2023 14:04 - Why. (Chanel T.)
That hit me on several levels. First was an empathy for YOU, I felt his...
May 16th, 2023 09:41 - Evil woman (Sam424)
There is nothing you’ve gone that I can’t unknot.
Great line and...
May 16th, 2023 04:09 - Breathe (Sam424)
I felt it and whilst my dialogue may have been different the self prodding...
May 16th, 2023 04:06 - Celsius Rising (Neville)
I’m still mulling the “invisible “ but as I always I love the sashay...
May 16th, 2023 04:02 - The love story that ends (Justagirl)
It’s the perfect way to be. Authentically without agenda, offer up and...
May 16th, 2023 02:28 - Surround yourself (NafisaSB)
It is Di important to connect w the right people.
May 16th, 2023 02:26 - My Best Friend (Zhangyuyouyu)
Cool that you wrote this. We got to feel and you got to emote. That’s a...
May 16th, 2023 02:25 - Peace Through Prayers (Orchidee)
I feel your heart on this.
May 16th, 2023 02:22 - Kip (Elahe poems)
The intended is lucky and I’m sure feels honored
May 16th, 2023 02:20 - Sordid Sort It (Introverted Sage)
Walk with me while we sort it out …,
That’s the perfect request for...
May 16th, 2023 02:16 - CLICHE’ NO LONGER (Bobby O)
Your words really gratify and your humble decry truly identifies a certain...
May 16th, 2023 02:07 - Song to Julie (David Wakeling)
You get tied up inside by indescribable force. I think it’s lucky you...
May 16th, 2023 01:54 - Not The Place To Travel. (Goldfinch60)
Who could argue w that? Good thought.
May 16th, 2023 01:52 - Life (Ilovethecolorblue6)
An innate stubborn reflex is both hood and bad. That is the dichotomy of...
May 15th, 2023 20:59 - stars and gripes (Arqios)
It’s a nice read I looked up 1433. What an interesting year
May 13th, 2023 12:15 - Yesterdays (Jerry Reynolds)
So cool. So to the point. Nice thought. Good write. Nice read. Actually...
May 13th, 2023 12:12 - Doppelgänger (Horrorautumnpoet)
The replica and effigy.
Too many cool lines here to list all but that...
May 13th, 2023 12:02 - To an end (Shanzah)
I kept it like an oath w trust and so much more.
That’s a powerful...
May 13th, 2023 04:14 - The Tears of a Crowd Forming (Neville)
“What began as a trickle.” Your phrase conjures visceral and tactile...
May 13th, 2023 04:08 - Feeding the Beast (2781)
It’s real, it’s a story for us all to absorb and to commit to the...
May 13th, 2023 03:58 - SLEEP (Bloodorange)
The dichotomy here I believe is that you know that answer to the question...
May 13th, 2023 01:51 - How (Ilovethecolorblue6)
There is no substitute for the people part of your inquiry. I hate to be...
May 12th, 2023 22:53 - My sudden anger (Jjulia)
I didn’t get it. Each new line seems unattached to others constantly...
May 12th, 2023 21:32 - That Stubborn gurl. (Serene)
May 11th, 2023 10:52 - That Stubborn gurl. (Serene)
It makes so much sense and I kinda cheered her bravery growing and...
May 11th, 2023 10:52 - Glass flower (Ilovethecolorblue6)
That seems so accurate.
May 11th, 2023 10:27 - Three Cheers To Ann Maria Reeves Jarvis (Rew4er2nail)
May 11th, 2023 10:01 - Three Cheers To Ann Maria Reeves Jarvis (Rew4er2nail)
I wrote a piece that speaks to sudden loss and in my case it was my mom....
May 11th, 2023 09:56 - Enough (Wolf)
Find a friend or someone you trust, it can help to relieve just s little...
May 11th, 2023 09:41 - New Deal (Kurt Philip Behm)
That last stanza was on time and powerful.
May 11th, 2023 09:36 - If I were (Sorenbarrett)
Dude, not like your usual stellar write. It’s just sorta arbitrary rhyme...
May 11th, 2023 06:27 - Happenings (Fay Slimm.)
“And I have to watch indifferent nature”.
Certainly to describe an...
May 11th, 2023 05:05 - The quiet kid (Anouk)
That pounds like a bass drum deeply into my brain, it outlines truly...
May 11th, 2023 02:55 - Carol goes to a bar. (David Wakeling)
Wow! I trust your truth and respect your right to share. It does stir up...
May 11th, 2023 02:44 - A welcome return (Orchidee)
You plan the revelry and I’m in.
May 11th, 2023 02:27 - Titillate my duality (Lyriclitty)
This, Dear Poet, is excellent on several levels. “But not afraid to...
May 10th, 2023 20:26 - Sorry? (DontSleepOnTheBoy)
Here is a truth that’s hard for some people to fully realize. Now , I am...
May 10th, 2023 19:20 - don\'t look behind you (Phoebe)
I shivered and imagined.
May 10th, 2023 09:26 - Changing roles (Gehna500)
Questions are fine but without an attempt to occasionally at least try to...
May 10th, 2023 07:35 - A New Day (Zaynbc)
It’s a nice start to perhaps a new hobby. I find jotting down my thought...
May 10th, 2023 04:18 - Tempted (Msa)
Like that great song by Phoebe Snow
NO REGRETS cuz love will linger and...
May 10th, 2023 04:14 - Friend (AntaraDwivedi)
That is a friend. I enjoyed the read and I’m thinking it would be nice...
May 10th, 2023 03:29 - Word Worthies (Orchidee)
Blameless I afraid.
Strong and resolved also
May 10th, 2023 03:08 - Giving up the Fight (David Wakeling)
Like a salve o open wounds the parrot eased a fear , not alone , and...
May 10th, 2023 01:31 - The Universe (¥in Lin)
Scars into constellation. That’s vivid and maybe the refectory way to...
May 10th, 2023 01:28 - Tears Of Desperation (Robert Isaacs Chiwala)
Seems like you get it and will soon achieve a middle that greats both...
May 10th, 2023 01:26 - Let it out (NafisaSB)
When I do follow this true advice I do indeed feel that cathartic release.
May 10th, 2023 01:22 - The First Girl (Bella.26)
Who could argue with that?
May 10th, 2023 01:21 - Tenuous (Keith Jeffries)
No matter what. It seems to say don’t hide emotion and take the present...
May 9th, 2023 23:22 - forget me knot (Swenlo52)
Yearning honestly. I like it
May 9th, 2023 23:20 - My Commitment (Satishverma)
It seems like I like it, I just don’t think I’m clear on “brave...
May 9th, 2023 23:17 - Hope-Re: Lino Cut of Goldfinch60 (Myself and me)
I dedicated a piece to you
Titled
The Voices that you feed
May 9th, 2023 21:34 - Over- seas (Ebony)
Nice ideas and concept. Lots of wasted words. Rewrite this and cut it in...
May 7th, 2023 19:55 - Love Potion No.19 (Parisab)
Jumping in w integrity and honor , I’m certain is , was, and will always...
May 7th, 2023 04:54 - Conspiracy Theory (MendedFences27)
On an altruistic path a pure agenda is like a new carefully tended crop ...
May 7th, 2023 04:42 - Who I am (Dev Parth)
I throw just laurels.
May 7th, 2023 02:49 - We Have Memories. (Goldfinch60)
For fun and exploration of etymology I read this poem out loud twice with...
May 7th, 2023 02:12 - Just a Man With a Thing About Bees (Neville)
Playful and a tad irreverent , perhaps to set you off guard ? And my...
May 7th, 2023 00:54 - CONNECTION (Bobby O)
I’m hoping it rings. Thanks , as always, for your astute insight and...
May 7th, 2023 00:17 - Themes of the mind (Jjulia)
Jumpin in, joining life , ending this hideout
May 6th, 2023 23:36 - Leave me Alone (Tanu Shree)
Cathartic
May 6th, 2023 23:33 - A Subway Dance (Light)
The SAME breathes w comfort though that diverse path is camouflage...
May 6th, 2023 20:43 - We need (Sorenbarrett)
Freakin perfect The list of luminaries that reside already in our past ,...
May 6th, 2023 18:41 - let (Jark)
I read it twice as I was unprepared for that last line and thought reading...
May 6th, 2023 18:23 - What is Depression? (Mrharrell)
Manic extreme , disproportionate reaction , but perhaps most significant...
May 6th, 2023 16:23 - Smaller than Wanted (DamKb)
Introspective reflection awakens a crowd in a measured way that tempts...
May 6th, 2023 10:15 - My Last Hope (Dev Parth)
Nice content but you use the same subject/verb sentence structure...
May 6th, 2023 08:38 - His House (Bella.26)
Cheap shots are fiction that only serve to bolster selfish moments...
May 6th, 2023 05:50 - What If Aliens Are Really Demons? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
The physics seems to forbid any arrivals that aren’t drones or A,I. The...
May 6th, 2023 03:55 - I Now Pro-nonce You (Not My King) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I looked it up and by using that exactly correct wording like Picard ye...
May 6th, 2023 03:31 - Upon Recalling Youth and Poetry (Neville)
It so flows
Omnidirectional keeping readers transfixed w contents and...
May 6th, 2023 03:28 - Trusting In The Truth (Orchidee)
Interesting format and seems handled easy w your pen.
May 6th, 2023 03:22 - Drunken Moth (Jaxxie)
Of never making it far- a tale w caution mixed with the exacting journey...
May 6th, 2023 00:53 - THE GARDEN OF LIFE (That writer Bree)
A winner I compare the chosen words and style to Smokey Robinson who is...
May 6th, 2023 00:32 - Greed for power (NafisaSB)
Like the message and the content and what I really think was brilliant was...
May 6th, 2023 00:12 - old friend (Ashley Rae)
It’s a great read. Hits home.
May 6th, 2023 00:07 - Increasing Angst (Satishverma)
I got lost. Stratosphere laughs andThe moon to touch in inclement weather...
May 5th, 2023 20:40
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