Comments on community poems by Garry
- Again (Tristan Robert Lange)
Nicely structured. Well done
April 1st, 2017 14:41 - Not Enough Soap (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well formed verse. I enjoyed it. Thank you .
April 1st, 2017 14:09 - Date Request (Jabberwocky)
Very good. Starkly beaufiful. And, as usual, no wasted words. Well...
April 1st, 2017 10:24 - Take Out The Trash (WriteBeLight)
The grinding reality of everyday life. Nicely done
April 1st, 2017 10:23 - Glasses (Robert \" grave robber\" redford.)
Well crafted. Short and very sweet.
April 1st, 2017 10:20 - To Sleep? (Garry)
No pills added though!
April 1st, 2017 09:32 - To Sleep? (Garry)
I am out of whisky so recently my tipple has been a glass of homemade...
April 1st, 2017 09:31 - The Flag (Allfourwalkers)
I feel sure this isn\'t about a flag. I dont quite know what but it has...
April 1st, 2017 03:21 - You are (Katherined)
Some lovely ideas. Evokes a painful longing? Well done.
April 1st, 2017 03:13 - I Wish My Friends Were Like sausages (Garry)
Thank you.
March 31st, 2017 16:20 - I Wish My Friends Were Like sausages (Garry)
Broski. Never been called that before. I shall check it out with the kids...
March 31st, 2017 13:35 - Beg (Brandon k f)
Very good. I have tried haikus but find them really hard.
March 31st, 2017 08:25 - This World (Lovelydarkanddeep)
Though on rereading it migbt sound a bit threatening?
March 31st, 2017 08:15 - To a Road Sign. (Garry)
Excellent. Comment. Thank you
March 31st, 2017 04:56 - Straw Man (Jabberwocky)
Stark. So much said in so few words. Excellent.
March 31st, 2017 04:13
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