She was so pretty and fine.
And he met her on the telephone party line.
She was talking to a friend.
And he was secretly listening in.
So he decided to give her a call.
And for him he made her in love fall.
- Author: Lamar Cole ( Offline)
- Published: October 18th, 2019 10:24
- Category: Love
- Views: 20
Comments2
GOOD AFTERNOON LAMAR ~ Welcome to MPS ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ Well penned and an unteresting TALE ! Its difficult not to listen in when you hit a Party Line ! We*ll forgive this time because he got a RESULT ! Love the ELIZABETHAN word order in your last line ~ but you did at least manage to preserve the RHYME which is very importamt in Performance Poetry ! MPS works by reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ OK Please check our site. We are an engaged Couple and share a site !
Blessings to You & Yours
ANGELA & BRIAN ๐งก๐๐งก๐
Sweet and enjoyable!
Good Writing
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