Sun!
Cast your golden rope
Cross the sea!
Pull my island closer
T’wards your royalty!
Your rays tender
Dry the tears
That ages cast
Down the years.
Sun!
Jewel of the sky!
Amber diamond!
This dusk
Be only mine;
Thine flares
Your soothing visage;
Let them linger,
If only in my mind!
Sun!
I bid thee farewell
As you descend
The sapphire steps.
Should chance permit,
I shall behold
Your gilded ascent
From the depths
Of the azure sea.
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Author:
Joakim Bergen (
Offline) - Published: February 28th, 2023 16:42
- Comment from author about the poem: This is a pic I took on my daily walk. Hope you like it!
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Comments2
Great click my dear,
The scene is superb,
Your ode to the sun,
Is indeed a nice one!
Talking to the Sun is a little confusing.It reads like a script rather than a poem.What is missing is how you feel about the Sun.
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