Musing.
Time enters musing-land
with remembered blush of passion-schooling.
Mated scribes must bolster
love that long ago wrote lusty twosomes.
My pen still strokes paired words
which evoke rare amour, like his used to.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: May 18th, 2023 03:56
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This is quite nice.It seems unfinished but hey what would I know
Hello David -- Your visit and comment on Musing are truly appreciated - I sometimes prefer readers to add their own reasons for romantic heartaches but good to know you like a bit more intrigue to mull over and will keep that in mind for a next time.
Trying to write and your mind is occupied with thoughts of someone close , with gull actions as an omen. a beautiful piece of poetry. It reads smooth and easy and creates an image nearly all writers have encountered, the obsessed mind. Lovely poetry. - Phil A.
So pleased that your read brought such a lovely comment on Musing dear Phil - -- and yes the obsessed mind can affect every poet at one time or another.
Good write Fay.
Thank you most subcerely for your visit and read of Musing dear Orchi.
"Musing" is a thought-provoking and introspective poem that invites readers to contemplate the passage of time, the fleeting nature of relationships, and the power of imagination. 👌👌
Am really grateful for your thoughts on Musing - - You sum up the more important part of the poem and thank you for such a wise review.
this is quite simply beautiful poetry .. simple as that 🖤..x
And I simply say thank you Sir Nev. for your considered opinion on what I nearly forgot to post - -- mucho appreciated as ever............x
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