Our Place.

Goldfinch60



The weekend was over

So back home we drove,

Such a great weekend,

Staying in our favourite place

Where all was done for us.

Sitting in the lounge

A waiter comes to me,

“Would you like a drink sir”

“Yes please I say”

I order the drinks,

They are brought to our table,

I can deal with that.

In our room we look out

And see the sun shining on the sea.

We walk the beach hand in hand,

Such a wonderful time was had.

But the most important thing

Was our love,

Our love for each other,

Shining brighter than the sun

Every moment of our life.

There we were together

In our favourite place

That we call “Our Place”.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 8th, 2023 01:20
  • Comment from author about the poem: We went to our favourite Hotel on the Isle of Wight this weekend and had a great time. The picture was the view from our room at dawn, five o'clock on Sunday morning.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • orchidee

    Was it me, that waiter?! With the water. lol.

    • Goldfinch60

      Not this time Orchi.

      Andy

    • LIZ

      Oh so beautiful!! And I love the song!!

      • Goldfinch60

        It was, thank you Liz.

        Andy

      • Teddy.15

        Andy it's such a pleasure to share with you your sincerely true love story with Mary it gives so many hope. 💖💖

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Teddy, it really is my pleasure.

          Andy

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Beautiful moment, Andy. Thanks for sharing.

          • Goldfinch60

            My absolute pleasure Jerry.

            Andy

          • Bella Shepard

            There is something so special about "Our Place", that when you're not there you still see it and it gives you joy. A beautiful pic that captures a beautiful weekend, keep making those memories dear friend.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Bella, "Our Place" is very special to us and we will be going back many times.

              Andy

            • Mottakeenur Rehman

              Through its straightforward language and vivid imagery, it invites readers to share in the warmth and happiness of this special moment in their lives.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Mottakeenur, may many share these moments.

                Andy



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