Rain kissed my cheeks,
God blessed me with a poison navy
that i throw up every night on my bedsheets
grey heaven looked down for me
the broken angels threw a spell on me
wearing all black and pray for me
in my funeral when i was truly happy
walking under the falling tears
tied with black ribbon to hold up my wings
voices were exiting my ears
because the sound of the rain
was a spell that freed all of my fears
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MrsD (Pseudonym) (
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Welcome mrs.D
Some great lines in this
" tied in black ribbons to hold up my wings"
Fantastic imagery
Looking forward to reading more
OMG thank you so much i really appreciated it..especially the fact that it came from someone as creative as you thank u sm
A very nice write here MrsD, the imagery of broken angels, truly sums up the frustrating state, of the here and now.
I also really liked it, when you you said, rain can be a "poison navy", but also the cold splashes of it, "freed all of my fears", very enjoyable indeed.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
really appreciated it thank u so much it makes me the happiest
It was a wonderful read!
Especially "the broken angels threw a spell on me wearing all black and pray for me" It's a dark and deliciously themed and visual poem filled to the brim with emotions! Keep it up!
thanks for the beautiful words u beautiful soul..
as well as expressive & emotionally charged .. your poem is impressive & was very muchly enjoyed ..
All Good Things .. Neville
This makes me the happiest ...thank you so much for the support ..it meant the world to me..
Beautiful
just as beatiful as you..your art your soul..and your eyes
i dont know what to say seeing that we dont know each other unless its tina
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I love the idea of this regular music of the rain .it's the monotonous but inspiring decor of my flat country .A theme that I often develop in my writings .thanks for sharing .
thank u for the inspiring and beautiful words..it is such an honor to be a part of such an artistic community ..thanks
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