Words Tanka.

Goldfinch60



When the sun rises 

And the world begins to wake 

I share words with all,

Words of differing meanings

To share with those who read them.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 29th, 2024 02:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: I do the majority of my writing at dawn.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 12
  • User favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet.
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Comments7

  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold.

  • David Wakeling

    That's a clever piece.I enjoyed reading.Well done

    • Goldfinch60

      Most kind David, thank you.

      Andy

    • John Prophet

      Fun stuff this writing be.

      • Goldfinch60

        It certainly is John.

        Andy

      • Accidental Poet

        My Muse cracks the whip at all hours, and if I don't write it down write away it stands the chance of being lost in the ruins of poetry than never happened. And you've blessed us with this fine offering on this wonderful morning. Well penned Andy. 😉👍

        • Goldfinch60

          That Muse can come at us at all times AP, sometimes I write at others times but mainly in the early morning.
          Thank you.

          Andy

          • Accidental Poet

            I also find that the early morning is when my Muse cracks the whip most often. I don't think she ever sleeps. 🤔

          • Teddy.15

            And wonderful words they are. 🌹

            • Goldfinch60

              Much appreciated Teddy.

              Andy

            • Thomas W Case

              Superb work.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Thomas.

                Andy

              • Doggerel Dave

                Dawn? Dawn? You have nothing but my fullest admiration, Sir. Wot I means is , how can you be fully conscious, coherent, inspired to compose at........Dawn?

                I'd like a little (just a little) of what you are taking, please Andy.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Yes I am an early bird Dave but by the time Midday comes I've had it! LOL
                  I have always got up early, if I look at the clock when I wake up and it is anytime after 6 am I have had a lay in.

                  Andy



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