On the tee they stood,
The man and the good priest,
To hit the ball round the course,
To see who could hit the least.
The man hit his ball,
And landed on the green,
The priest struck his too,
And broke the waters sheen.
The priest waded in the water,
And struck his ball to grass,
The man putted his ball,
But the hole it did pass.
The man just stood and swore,
“Sod it, missed the bugger” he uttered,
The priest just looked at him,
And “Do not swear!” he uttered.
The next hole was the same,
The man just missed the putt,
“Sod it, missed the bugger”,
Every time he did tutt.
The priest then said,
“If your swearing doesn’t cease
God will strike you down,
And take away your peace”
The last hole came at last,
And both were on the green,
The man missed the putt,
And was once more obscene.
Lightening flashed towards them,
The priest was looking smugger,
But the words he heard when he got struck,
Were “Sod it, missed the bugger!”.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 23rd, 2024 00:54
- Comment from author about the poem: The video is something I saw yesterday Mary and I laughed our heads off. Dave Allen was one of the funniest men I have known.
- Category: Humor
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Comments9
Guess the man won the match? 🤔
Yes he did AP. LOL
Andy
Fantastic! This really made me smile. 🙂
So glad about that Tom, if I can make people smile it makes my day.
Andy
Ooh lol.
Thanks Orchi.
Great fun story and well constructed.Excellent
Most kind David, thank you.
Andy
Great win in verse is the best of humor. Loved this one Andy it actually made me laugh out loud.
Thank you soren, I have done my job then by making you laugh.
Andy
Well done, Andy.
A good laugh over yesterdays-coffee.
Thank you Jerry, much appreciated.
Andy
Thank you so much for the smiles Andy. Dave Allen was my mum and dad’s favourite. The video was ace and your poem was pretty good too. Happy Tuesday 🏴🏴🏴
Much appreciated Cassie, thank you.
Andy
LOL very funny 🤣
Thank you Teddy, much appreciated.
Andy
Sydney has Rookwood Cemetery, very large with chapels etc relating to the spaces allocated to different religions. So, the Catholic section has St Michael the Archangel Chapel, atop of which is/was/is a statue of St Michael. Told on a grand tour of the cemetery that St Michael had been struck and destroyed twice by lightening (highest point for miles around), I with my lack of tact suggested it was God taking the Mickey. Anyone woulda thought I'd let off a big smelly in a crowded room.....
Very much enjoyed the write and video - my kinda humour......
Some people of religion just do not deign to have a sense of humour Dave.
Andy
I'd forgotten this - you reminded me , Andy. I think I'm going to rhyme it in the next week or so....
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