school days


yesterday i had the best B-day party ever

 

i was alone without my friends but it's better

 

coz i know that i'll be in their hearts 4ever

 

i wish they were with me that day

 

& i hope they feel the same way

 

i hope they rememberd our silly days @ school

 

our joking , playing & being such a fool

 

also annoying the teachers by our behaviors

 

dancing , singing & being such a failures

 

these r the things we were doing @ school

 

annoying everyone & being such a fool

 

now you all know what we were doing there

 

i think you should think & be alittle fair




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  • Author: lulu (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 8th, 2010 12:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: i guess even if this poem is short but i feel it remembers me by my best friends i had who r still my friends but they r far away from me living @ the other side of the world :(
  • Category: Friendship
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  • Cheeky Missy.

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    nair36
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    nair36 said:
    August 8th, 2010 16:36

    memories are the best

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      lulu
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      lulu said:
      August 9th, 2010 13:10

      yah sure that's also a reason 2 live this life :D :)

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    Kri2arch
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    Kri2arch said:
    August 9th, 2010 02:22

    Wow! Memories can never be washed away by the long showers we take. Its a beautiful piece, i love it.

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      lulu
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      lulu said:
      August 9th, 2010 13:11

      thanks alot :D cheers :P

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      Kri2arch
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      Kri2arch said:
      August 9th, 2010 16:07

      U r welcome my dear

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    Cheeky Missy
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    Cheeky Missy said:
    January 21st, 2011 21:57

    I really like this one...you made me smile with your delightful presentation of school days with friends...it's humorous and funny, especially the last two lines...and too cute too....
    Too bad your friends have be so impossibly far away...sweet memories are comforting....but left with only memories, it is hard. This is a delightful tribute to your close friends! I love your rhyming and rythm!

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      lulu
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      lulu said:
      January 23rd, 2011 17:49

      Oh god .. it is really hard when u know that ur friends are far far away
      thanks a lot for ur comment :)



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