What is the point if you give and get nothing,
Life is Pointless,
Love is pointless,
Love... is a funny thing,
You laugh, you cry, you.... love,
The butterflies when you see him,
The dispare when he's gone,
Love is a funny thing....
But in my life there is none.
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Author:
Howisha-Hoween (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem was written by my friend Kim Brewster. She wanted me to publish it to see what others think.
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Comments2
I think it is well thought out and well written.
I will pass that onto her, and hopefully she will create an account to publish her other poems as I think she is very talented.
It is very interesting. I find I cannot justify it as love if I am demanding, though. Let Kim know it is a very nicely written piece. I like it.
i will pass it on.
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