Shining in sunlight,
silver strands of silken string;
such a simple piece.
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Author:
Stormy Day (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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Another really good Haiku. You must like writing them?
Very much so, when the mood strikes me. Nature is my favorite theme, because the beauty is already there; all that is needed is the words to (inaccurately) describe what can't be confined to clumsy words. I only write them when I'm truely inspired though, otherwise it ends in disaster.
Thank you so much.
I think the two haiku you have posted here have been very inspired. In fact I think I'll try one tomorrow!
Great! I'll be sure to look at it.
Fascinating...and the image is excellent! Great job...and yet you could explore the spider's web much further as well....so this is one angle and delightfully put!!
I guess that's the thing with haikus; try to express what you can with the syllable restriction. But that's what makes them beautiful I think, you have to make each word count.
Ya, and you did excellently! I am sorry if I at all downplayed what you wrote...please forgive me. I only think you could examine the topic even further...maybe more haikus or maybe not...it's up to you.
No, no, I apreciate your critisism; it's constructive. You have a point, further scrutiny might be a good idea. Thank you.
I wanted to read a little more about the spider's web!
Alright, *laughs* you guys have got me; I'll get on that right away! 🙂
Silky, smoothly scripted.
Much thanks.
You must be the Rainbow that the sun shines through the dew.
Great read thanks for sharing.
Thank you! Not sure about the rainbow bit, lol.
Attention! I just had a great idea. I'll continue The Spider's Web, but with a catch; it'll be under fusioned poems. Of course I'll add more stanzas once someone (s) have joined in, but I would really like all your help! Everyone is invited.
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