ADVENTURES IN A DREAM


There was a boy,

Who wanted to become a king.

He took fake guns in his pocket,

Which looked as if they were some rockets.

 

He desired to meet the Queen of England far away

He took a hot balloon to go there,

And up in the air he swayed,

 

When he reached London,

He landed in a chimney,

When he went through the chimney,

He reached Sidney!

 

He couldn't find a way from there,

Until a ship came,

When he showed an SOS signal,

And upon the ship he came.

 

He came back to New Delhi,

Telling about his adventures.

Suddenly, when shaken, I woke up,

"Oh! Why in my dream do I venture?"

 


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  • Author: SUDARSHAN (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 9th, 2011 11:17
  • Category: Fantasy
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    Dolphine29
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    Dolphine29 said:
    March 10th, 2011 17:37

    The best way to put and in our dreams we do dare to really dream.
    Made me smile :)
    Best
    Dolphine

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    Cheeky Missy
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    Cheeky Missy said:
    March 10th, 2011 21:17

    Fun. You might want to make your rhyme scheme more consistent...it isn't as polished as some of your other submissions. It was indeed a fun story...and you concluded it nicely with the rude awakening!



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