In the ashes they made me
Forming and saying
He is the one, the ultimate gun
They let me displace, form a space
Between you and me, I want to break the space between
They don't want me seen, but I want a scene
A scene with a lady, the lady with a name
A name of yours, but they wont open up the doors
So im stuck with this space and a never changing place
Why do they pace, my mind and its weights
Please change this space, add something new
Something that is true, something I can feel
Something I have seen
Change the space between
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Author:
Jalso (
Offline) - Published: April 2nd, 2013 23:38
- Category: Love
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Comments3
I know you categorized this as a love poem but I find it sad that there are those spaces between that you can't figure out how to fill and remove. good write!
Fsill those empty space spaces with love and your life will be fuu of happiness. Good write, soki
Beautiful but sad. I hope you find something to fill those empty spaces with.
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