Some Sad Dark Secret

Carl Halling

"Temper your enthusiasm,"

She said,

"The extremes of your reactions;

You should have

A more conventional frame

On which to hang

Your unconventionality."

"Don't push people,"

She said,

"You make yourself vulnerable."

 

She told me not to rhapsodise,

That it would be difficult,

Impossible, perhaps,

For me to harness my dynamism.

The tone of my work,

She said,

Is often a little dubious.

She said

She thought

That there was something wrong.

 

That I'm hiding

Some sad

Dark secret from the world.

"Temper your enthusiasm,"

She said,

"The extremes of your reactions;

You should have

A more conventional frame

On which to hang

Your unconventionality."

  • Author: Carl Halling (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 13th, 2015 09:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: Some Sad Dark Secret was inspired by words spoken to me by a former tutor and mentor of mine when I was a mature student of about 27 at university in London, as well as my own reflections of them from the same era.
  • Category: Reflection
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