My heart has been broken since the day I pushed you away, so many thoughts in my head yet still nothing to say
I still can't find the words that would help me explain, all the reasons and all the apologies for causing you so much pain
What's done has been done and it kills me knowing I was the one, who ruined two hearts that used to beat together as one
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Author:
Adamwilliam (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this poem after I ruined what was a perfect relationship over my own insecurity and stupidity
- Category: Sad
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WELCOME ADAM ~ Thanks for a very passionate first poem dripping with angst. We've all done it Adam so we can empathise. We always hurt the one we love with a hasty word we can't recall ! The structure of your poem is excellent (despite the sad content !) it is replete with rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN
I have done the same exact thing and I really wish I didn't. great poem!
Great write
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