Everlasting hypnotism
who would have thought she would do this to him?
all it took was a conversation,
and it was in no relation
to what the shadows whispered
When he felt most disturbed
and left no stone unturned.
Trying to search for something
that he himself doesn't know is missing.
He's lost out there,
you should go prepared.
There's no telling what you'll find
all I'm here to do is remind
you, that you've got to wake up.
-FS
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Author:
fauxsabotage (
Offline) - Published: November 18th, 2016 19:15
- Category: Love
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Comments5
🙂 🙂 this is an awesome first poem.... happy writing
Thank you Elegant_Style! 😁 Much appreciated! 🙂
Welcome to MPS! Awesome first poem. Thanks for sharing!
Thank you! 🙂
Very nice :3
Thank you I try! ;b
Great way to enter this site , with a very well written piece of work....look forward to more
Thank you pharaoh! It's awesome to get reviews on my work! 🙂
WELCOME FS ~ Thanks you fora very challenging first poem ! It happens we do allow ourselves to be hynotised by another person ~ Especially MEN by LADIES ~ they are so hypnotic. Love the advice in the last line ~ if we are mesmerised by someone ! YOU'VE GOT TO WAKE UP ! Love the structure of the poem ~ rhyming couplets and full of mesmerising rhythm ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Please check my poems ~ YOURS BRIAN.(UK)
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