the cuts
by kat
i see the scars on my legs
i won't let them see the scars
they will never see
this will hurt them
the pain was great
the pain when a dog hits the cuts
it felt great
the pain was amazing
they think i should die
i think so too
my family put me down
my dad raped me
pain is my life
my mom put me down
my sister called me names
my brother was there
i just got hurt
i went to school
i tried to get away
away from it all
it didn't work
it was there too
the pain is real
the pain is inside me
the pain is life
pain is great
it seems right
it seems fair
goodbye world
goodbye life
goodbye people
no one cares
i don't care
they don't care either
goodbye family
goodbye friends
hello bathroom
hello blade
hello darkness
bye bye life
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Author:
Kitkat231997 (
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- Category: Gothic
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A very powerful and emotive poem, a very brave write! Well done
Great write
oh nhoh noh pls dont say goodbye to us. this poem is dark n emotive, dark lyrical and but u r not alone, i assure u GOD can help sothe the pain ad only the ungodly can inflict such pain on u. but rise above it and write on as many can relate to it. i also had sibling rivalry but it willall go away eventually as u seem young. thumbs up and yor writing power too should cheer u up.
pls do coment my latest poem but my suicide one might be more consoling. take care
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