What you see through your eyes
I will never see through mine
So I'm not surprised that what I write
Reads differently in your mind
But don't think for a second
That there's a mistake of any kind
It is just that we are different
And we think along different lines
We are each a wonderful creation
Alike but different from the rest
With an independence of thought
That should never be suppressed
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Author:
Daniel (
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BRILLIANT DANIEL ! A timely reminder that in essence although we look at the same scenario ~ we all see it differently ~ some through ROSE TINTED Glasses (that's me !) and others through a GLASS DARKLY ! We all hear the same message from TV etc ~ but we all interpret it differently according to our situation ! How dull if we were all the same ! VIVE LA DIFFERENCE ! Please check my SNOWDROPS POEM ~ Thanks BRIAN
Thank you Brian, it is these differences I believe that give us our checks and balances. They also give much needed colour to life, and show us there is more than one right way or one right answer!
Wonderfully written! -- phoenix
Thank you Phoenix!
Wonderfully written and expressed
Thank you Tony!
Welcome
Wonderfully written and expressed! Christina
Thank you Christina!
Excellent point and poem!
Thank you WBL!
Great idea, although I feel like there was some slightly different word choices you could have used to line up the syllables slightly better.
However, the whole point of your piece is that we all interpret things differently, and value different things.
So, on that note,
Great job yet again! : )
Thank you!
Oh!! Daniel this is
So bloody good..
I absolutely love it
It's bang on as we
Would say in the Uk.
Well bloody done sir!!!
Thank you for your great comment Mr Rose!
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