I touch the rain

Lolomgwtf

I touch the rain

Like drops of acid

Of memories past

 

Burning streaming down

Across moonbeams across grass

Vivid as the nightmares they spawn

 

I touch the rain

Velvety across dark lips

Reminding me of you and i

 

  • Author: Lolomgwtf (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 13th, 2017 05:13
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • P.X. Vexxus

    Nice write!
    Criticism: Use more diverse vocabulary!

    • Lolomgwtf

      Thank you. I don't usually publish on the internet but wanted to try this site out with just a little poem. Thanks.

      • P.X. Vexxus

        You're welcome! I've been using sites for a while now, and they've really helped me as a writer! I'm sure you'll think so too if you dedicate yourself 🙂

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        WELCOME LOLO ~ Thanks for you first poem ~ nice style ~ three neat triplets ! Personally I liked the repeat of I TOUCH THE RAIN a very evocative line in a very poignant poem. Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)

      • Tony36

        Great write



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