Three women, one bathroom...
An early morning alarm clock rise,
Not from bell but argument surprise.
The air was blue, the bathroom empty,
This sea of souls in discussions aplenty.
Usage of time was paramount to the altercation,
Nothing to be solved in this no chance creation.
Trio of voice intercede each other,
No quarter given, could go on until forever.
Oh my ears will not survive this ensemble of noise,
To quick to leave my bed, a fall without any poise.
When a word is used I know this time is bad,
Just a simple word they all shout, DAD !!!
No Churchill,no Lincoln, no ghandi peacemaker me,
So jacket in hand and to my car and work I flee.
My arm gets stuck inside the lining sleeve,
Thrown to the rear seat, just one purpose, leave !!
Absolutely no way I'm getting involved,
To work for peace and quiet, my troubles solved...
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Author:
P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 21st, 2017 03:19
- Comment from author about the poem: I was laid in bed last night and Was remembering a house I Owned a few years ago, Both my daughters lived With us then.... But just one bathroom... Some days I would Literally run out of The house to get away From the daily Bathroom bust up..
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VIVE L;A DIFFERENCE ! As your poem states Bathrooms for Men are paces to shave and s**t ~ in and out pdq. A lady on the other hand can spend hours in the Bathroom TITIVATING but never reaching perfection. More affluent Friends of mine (with two daughters) have three bathrooms ~ enough said. Thanks for sharing BRIAN Please check my poem ~ Thanks B
Thanks Brian
My current home
Has 4 bathrooms
But now there are
Just me and my
Wife in this very
Large house..
Go figure!!!
Oh my! I can just feel the competition. Great one P.H.!
Ha ha. thank you
WBL..
Great write
Thank you Tony
Welcome
My wife and I have separate bathrooms but it wasn't always thus when the kids were at home so I know this well - well observed PH
Thank you Michael
I have 5 siblings and my 2 parents, and we only have one bathroom, and it is terrible. So I only get about 5 minutes in there. While everyone else gets like 30.
My thoughts drifted away from the bath to 3 women all talking at the same time. And they each remember what the other said. But my mind like the old pin ball machine goes tilt. And, like you I have to leave.
Ha ha, fantastic comment
Augustus and absolutely
Spot on... thank you...
Great write and I could totally relate to this one....
Thank you NAP
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