One day a friend of mine asked me a question
What is Love ?
After a small Thinking i replied
"You see her everywhere ,your hear her voice every time
Fly without feathers and never notice others"
Wait wait he said-This is success love, not about love
After a small Thinking i replied
"Take a knife and put through your heart
The pain is nothing of what you got"
Wait wait he said again-This is Love Failure, not about love
After a small jerk i said
"You give everything and expect nothing
Give up your entire life in second without any hesitation
This feeling may be felt with your Mom,dad,brothers,sisters
Grand parents ,wife,and even with pets
Humans named the feelings a love"
If your need a practical experience get out and feel yourself - i said
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Author:
Rajkumar (
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You covered it I think .
Thanks line
Love ... not an easy thing to define, but you made a worthy attempt at it. Nice work, Rajkumar!
Thanks for your support gibs
Great question and answers!
Thanks light....just came by my mind
You are very talented!
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I love the "small thinking".
Thanks Augustus..hoped you enjoyed
Thank you damaged soul...I never expected such an wonderful comment..once again I thank for selecting my poem as yours favorite and encouraging me
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