She's a special kind of special,
Like a pearl on the beach
That's far out of reach.
I think she was made to crave;
A sea of rushing waves
Won't wash her away.
Most beautifully, her lasting luster
Reflects the pristine paradise
From which she was thrivingly ushered.
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Author:
iRonnie (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I crave this person that is gorgeously complicated but so incredibly beautiful and brilliant and independent. We are a world apart though 😣
- Category: Love
- Views: 96
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Comments1
I love the structure and scheme of the writing in this, especially when it changes in the final verse. It really makes it kind of burst out from the previous two, which seemed like a pleasant but brief lead-in to the last and most beautifully impactful final verse. I guess it's sort of like the big splash at the end of a waterslide. Well done!
Thank you!!!!! Your review itself is a poem 😍
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