The slither of the moon in the sky
Showing its rebirth,
The renewing of the time,
That time that always returns.
That time which gives us the chance
Gives us the chance to start again,
To start again in peaceful harmony,
Giving a sign of new times ahead.
Sometime in the future
My dream of peace will come true,
And the slither of moon
Will herald a new dawning,
Dawning into peaceful harmony.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 20th, 2017 01:30
- Comment from author about the poem: I just looked up into the sky early one morning and saw this moon and then wrote these words. The photograph is mine, taken of what I saw
- Category: Reflection
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Comments11
Niiice. I really like it
Thank you Shine, much appreciated.
A fine write G/F. Wanting the moon to go to a full moon (from crescent to whole), not a new moon (vice versa). Though we could then write about 'new' times of the new moon. Doh! Sometimes I take analogies too far, and end up in a tangle!
Keep taking the sherry Orchi.
Beautiful poem - I live for the tomorrow and no looking back - great words.
Thank you Michael, tomorrow will be wonderful as is each new moment.
Amen, i echo your plea in my recent piece. Once again excellent writing Goldfinch.
Thank you b-e much appreciated.
Awesome pic/poem combo. I too hope we all get to see your dream come true.
Thank you AP.
Gf, your dream of peace will transpire in a future realm. Right now let us work together to keep the sliver of peace we enjoy, alas, the world is in a cacophony of divergent calls for hate, fights, wars, etc. But, I like you, am a peacemaker. Moreover, I like your treatment of time. Time doesn't wait for us. Carpe diem; you never know what tomorrow will bring, but for today sow what you want tomorrow. Thanks for sharing...
Thank you for your comment rr, that dream of peace will always be there. Tomorrow is always going to be a better day.
You bet!
This is truly having that poetic feeling and uncontrollable poetic thoughts that takes us from one minute to other to places and sights to make us write. Just awesome.
Thank you so much m, most kind.
Cool poem ,very optimistic ...we all look for that peace
Thank you wl, that peace will come.
Ha, finally I got the reason that I could not write a beautiful piece like this, because I look the Moon at wrong time, not morning but night.
Beautiful and thoughtful.
The moon can bring on many beautiful thoughts both morning and night. Thank you mandm.
So beautiful, Goldfinch. Kudos!
Thank you very much Fred, your comment is much appreciated.
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