"What about me?!"
Screamed the fly to the distracted spider
Not a second thought was given
Nor a comment from the web rider
The fly sat in silence
Wishing for nothing but to leave
She felt as if a waste of time,
A useless pile of meat
She sat there long
And started to crumble
Till from her carcass
There was no mumble
She died alone
With no one beside her
No one loved her
Not even the spider.
A6
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Author:
A6 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is one of my very first poems, it hits hard still and the story reminds me so much of ''The Spider and the Fly'', let me know what it reminds you of down below, I would love to hear comments and opinions. Kisses!
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
I like the rhyming. This makes me think of a flatline. Like, there's a noise, a plea, until there's nothing. Not the beeping, but the way it spikes on the monitor lol
That is really awesome! I would have never thought of that
Spider & Web rider is a genius rhyme! Awesome write.
Thank you!
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