Comments received on poems by SerenWise
Woad
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah the magic of woad as used by the ancient warriors - - naked the bodies were painted in complex designs and it dark blue -green hue must have been frightening........ this piece describes too the greeny blue history that colours your dreams Seren - - a most interesting read.
April 8th, 2019 13:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah the magic of woad as used by the ancient warriors - - naked the bodies were painted in complex designs and it dark blue -green hue must have been frightening........ this piece describes too the greeny blue history that colours your dreams Seren - - a most interesting read.
April 8th, 2019 13:37
Woad
Neville said:
I like this poem, I like it a lot and whilst there may be some who are as yet unfamiliar with the term, and therefore, most likely the colour or the plant from which it may be extracted and some of its colourful history, they most certainly will be after reading you..... Neville
April 8th, 2019 13:20
Neville said:
I like this poem, I like it a lot and whilst there may be some who are as yet unfamiliar with the term, and therefore, most likely the colour or the plant from which it may be extracted and some of its colourful history, they most certainly will be after reading you..... Neville
April 8th, 2019 13:20
Brotin Bönd
moordykspot2 said:
first thing I though was\" Written ffom the heart.\"A few lines reflecting so much pain. So well composed .
April 8th, 2019 10:09
moordykspot2 said:
first thing I though was\" Written ffom the heart.\"A few lines reflecting so much pain. So well composed .
April 8th, 2019 10:09
Brotin Bönd
Neville said:
stings more than a bit... a sharp edged little gem... N
April 7th, 2019 14:01
Neville said:
stings more than a bit... a sharp edged little gem... N
April 7th, 2019 14:01
Brotin Bönd
Fay Slimm. said:
Ouch - - filled with genuine pathos these few well- written lines Seren - -hope he sees them and responds.
April 7th, 2019 11:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Ouch - - filled with genuine pathos these few well- written lines Seren - -hope he sees them and responds.
April 7th, 2019 11:12
Heaven Knows
Suresh said:
If not, then may you consummate this union soon - for I know, like you said, it will be a memory forever.
To be enthralled with such intensity,, even Gods will have to bless it.
April 5th, 2019 11:19
Suresh said:
If not, then may you consummate this union soon - for I know, like you said, it will be a memory forever.
To be enthralled with such intensity,, even Gods will have to bless it.
April 5th, 2019 11:19
Heaven Knows
Fay Slimm. said:
A steamy few lines of sensual metaphor which sets this reader\'s fancy alive with the ways love can make us soar. Great read Seren.
April 5th, 2019 11:14
Fay Slimm. said:
A steamy few lines of sensual metaphor which sets this reader\'s fancy alive with the ways love can make us soar. Great read Seren.
April 5th, 2019 11:14
Awaken
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love become ever stronger as each moment passes.
April 5th, 2019 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love become ever stronger as each moment passes.
April 5th, 2019 00:22
Awaken
Fay Slimm. said:
Potent and bold this list of sensuous invitations Seren - - - hope they will bring him into your arms quickly.
April 4th, 2019 13:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Potent and bold this list of sensuous invitations Seren - - - hope they will bring him into your arms quickly.
April 4th, 2019 13:18
Awaken
Neville said:
Let me have ya number and I\'m on my way........ sometimes words just fall into place....like these.. well stacked my friend.. Neville
April 4th, 2019 12:55
Neville said:
Let me have ya number and I\'m on my way........ sometimes words just fall into place....like these.. well stacked my friend.. Neville
April 4th, 2019 12:55
The Selkie
Neville said:
To mer is to be almost human & almost maid in heaven... a deceptively deep poem and true... N
April 4th, 2019 12:52
Neville said:
To mer is to be almost human & almost maid in heaven... a deceptively deep poem and true... N
April 4th, 2019 12:52
Wrecking Ball
Fay Slimm. said:
If from experience and so vividly painted the past beds fast in memory - - but moving on makes things more blurry - wishing you freedom from dreams of abuse - - catch hold of the future and try not to let go.
April 4th, 2019 12:44
Fay Slimm. said:
If from experience and so vividly painted the past beds fast in memory - - but moving on makes things more blurry - wishing you freedom from dreams of abuse - - catch hold of the future and try not to let go.
April 4th, 2019 12:44
Wrecking Ball
Neville said:
Emotionally charged, almost to the point of spilling over, but controlled to the very end.... If autobiographical, I sincerely hope you have since moved on.. thoroughly enjoyed regardless... N
April 4th, 2019 12:32
Neville said:
Emotionally charged, almost to the point of spilling over, but controlled to the very end.... If autobiographical, I sincerely hope you have since moved on.. thoroughly enjoyed regardless... N
April 4th, 2019 12:32
Three Little Words
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I’m so full up with love catching up on poems.
This is beautiful.
💜
April 4th, 2019 01:37
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I’m so full up with love catching up on poems.
This is beautiful.
💜
April 4th, 2019 01:37
Three Little Words
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I was lost at sea in the gentle soft rhythm of your words.
Thank you kindly
Much peace and respect
April 3rd, 2019 09:05
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I was lost at sea in the gentle soft rhythm of your words.
Thank you kindly
Much peace and respect
April 3rd, 2019 09:05
Three Little Words
Neville said:
if this is not a love poem, I dont know what is.....
April 3rd, 2019 04:03
Neville said:
if this is not a love poem, I dont know what is.....
April 3rd, 2019 04:03
Melodious
Neville said:
this is a song of longing... filled with want.... delicious...
March 30th, 2019 09:04
Neville said:
this is a song of longing... filled with want.... delicious...
March 30th, 2019 09:04
Invocation
Fay Slimm. said:
An alluring invitation to a distant but missed lover - and so potent in form and phrasing. Loved this read Seren.
March 19th, 2019 06:15
Fay Slimm. said:
An alluring invitation to a distant but missed lover - and so potent in form and phrasing. Loved this read Seren.
March 19th, 2019 06:15
Invocation
Nicholas Browning said:
The first half is the vibe I\'m with right now. The second half, maybe later.
The sudden transition from innocence to foreplay was a nice touch.
March 19th, 2019 00:55
Nicholas Browning said:
The first half is the vibe I\'m with right now. The second half, maybe later.
The sudden transition from innocence to foreplay was a nice touch.
March 19th, 2019 00:55
The Waking Dream
Goldfinch60 said:
May that song bring your hearts together as one.
March 18th, 2019 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
May that song bring your hearts together as one.
March 18th, 2019 01:56
The Waking Dream
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this. A fresh take on love. Nicely done.
March 18th, 2019 00:33
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this. A fresh take on love. Nicely done.
March 18th, 2019 00:33
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