Comments received on poems by SerenWise
The Vow
dusk arising said:
I read your piece several times and the picture which came into my mind was of awaking with ones partner and the sleepy coming together when words are not needed but sounds will out.
The promise of each morning\'s bliss.
September 17th, 2019 03:00
dusk arising said:
I read your piece several times and the picture which came into my mind was of awaking with ones partner and the sleepy coming together when words are not needed but sounds will out.
The promise of each morning\'s bliss.
September 17th, 2019 03:00
The Vow
Fay Slimm. said:
Some beautiful words weave their gentle magic around this reflection on romance - another sigh of a read Seren.
September 17th, 2019 02:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Some beautiful words weave their gentle magic around this reflection on romance - another sigh of a read Seren.
September 17th, 2019 02:20
Ready-Made Muse
Neville said:
Outstanding in both form and composition....
September 16th, 2019 07:06
Neville said:
Outstanding in both form and composition....
September 16th, 2019 07:06
Ready-Made Muse
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - - Seren what a perfectly penned romantic ballad that spills from your poet\'s inventive fancy...... a linguistic pleasure to read and saved to my favourites.
September 16th, 2019 02:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - - Seren what a perfectly penned romantic ballad that spills from your poet\'s inventive fancy...... a linguistic pleasure to read and saved to my favourites.
September 16th, 2019 02:40
Ready-Made Muse
Goldfinch60 said:
An artwork so personal to you Serenwise.
September 16th, 2019 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
An artwork so personal to you Serenwise.
September 16th, 2019 01:21
La Rêverie
Fay Slimm. said:
The depth of loss in this read is astoundingly versed - love the style and pace - - a winner with me Seren and saved
September 14th, 2019 02:24
Fay Slimm. said:
The depth of loss in this read is astoundingly versed - love the style and pace - - a winner with me Seren and saved
September 14th, 2019 02:24
La Rêverie
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem SerenWise, your words show the strength that love can have.
September 14th, 2019 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem SerenWise, your words show the strength that love can have.
September 14th, 2019 00:23
La Rêverie
Neville said:
an absolute delight to read, consider, enjoy and dwell upon.... top marks from me anyway.....
Neville
September 13th, 2019 18:16
Neville said:
an absolute delight to read, consider, enjoy and dwell upon.... top marks from me anyway.....
Neville
September 13th, 2019 18:16
La Rêverie
dusk arising said:
Beautifully written. Never seen you write like this before.... it\'s poetry perfection.
I keep reading it as if it were answering a longing within me.
Absolute must for my favourites.
September 13th, 2019 15:50
dusk arising said:
Beautifully written. Never seen you write like this before.... it\'s poetry perfection.
I keep reading it as if it were answering a longing within me.
Absolute must for my favourites.
September 13th, 2019 15:50
Heretic
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, may those demons soon be dismissed.
September 12th, 2019 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, may those demons soon be dismissed.
September 12th, 2019 01:21
A Four Letter Word
Fay Slimm. said:
Love those two final lines Seren - - they augment the whole verse. - a great read.
August 31st, 2019 04:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Love those two final lines Seren - - they augment the whole verse. - a great read.
August 31st, 2019 04:26
A Four Letter Word
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write may that \'dove\' be with you always.
August 31st, 2019 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write may that \'dove\' be with you always.
August 31st, 2019 00:19
A Four Letter Word
Christina8 said:
A beautiful write Serenwise....absolutely lovely!!
August 30th, 2019 15:23
Christina8 said:
A beautiful write Serenwise....absolutely lovely!!
August 30th, 2019 15:23
Grey
Christina8 said:
This is really wonderfully done, I like this a lot Serenwise!
August 16th, 2019 17:24
Christina8 said:
This is really wonderfully done, I like this a lot Serenwise!
August 16th, 2019 17:24
Grey
Neville said:
Splendid, I really like this SerenWise
.......................Neville
August 15th, 2019 22:55
Neville said:
Splendid, I really like this SerenWise
.......................Neville
August 15th, 2019 22:55
Rapunzel
FineB said:
Hello Serenwise,
A good write and perspective on the
Rapunzel legend!
Keep writing
FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:31
FineB said:
Hello Serenwise,
A good write and perspective on the
Rapunzel legend!
Keep writing
FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:31
Solitaire
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes these bad-air days can take their negative toll Seren - trying to laugh \'em away works sometimes - - a telling write.
August 13th, 2019 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes these bad-air days can take their negative toll Seren - trying to laugh \'em away works sometimes - - a telling write.
August 13th, 2019 03:19
Solitaire
Goldfinch60 said:
That beauty, kindness and cleverness is within you and people do love, care and listen to you as your words flow onto the page.
August 13th, 2019 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
That beauty, kindness and cleverness is within you and people do love, care and listen to you as your words flow onto the page.
August 13th, 2019 01:05
Solitaire
Christina8 said:
don\'t give up on being kind and clever and everything that makes you unique. You are not alone in your feelings. But understand that they will not last forever......Christina
August 12th, 2019 19:34
Christina8 said:
don\'t give up on being kind and clever and everything that makes you unique. You are not alone in your feelings. But understand that they will not last forever......Christina
August 12th, 2019 19:34
The Gift
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words speak of the reality that loneliness brings and tell it so well Suren.
August 8th, 2019 06:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words speak of the reality that loneliness brings and tell it so well Suren.
August 8th, 2019 06:07
The Gift
Neville said:
tis sad but I have known many who still sit by their windows alone and unloved...
Night upon night upon night.... N
August 8th, 2019 05:46
Neville said:
tis sad but I have known many who still sit by their windows alone and unloved...
Night upon night upon night.... N
August 8th, 2019 05:46
The Gift
Christina8 said:
what a beautiful poem, serenwise. I think people take happiness for granted too.......but happiness is out there just waiting for you too! :-)
August 8th, 2019 00:26
Christina8 said:
what a beautiful poem, serenwise. I think people take happiness for granted too.......but happiness is out there just waiting for you too! :-)
August 8th, 2019 00:26
The Gift
dusk arising said:
Happiness is out there u know. Push a firework up where the sun don\'t shine and try not laughing!
August 8th, 2019 00:11
dusk arising said:
Happiness is out there u know. Push a firework up where the sun don\'t shine and try not laughing!
August 8th, 2019 00:11
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