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White Blanket
orchidee said:

Good write AS.

December 7th, 2023 14:29

White Blanket
Lorenz said:

3 tears of war on the blank.



December 7th, 2023 14:17

Mingle Hells (A Christmas Song for the Socially Awkward Depressive)
Goldfinch60 said:

Many true words in your song Ben.

Andy

December 6th, 2023 02:22

Mingle Hells (A Christmas Song for the Socially Awkward Depressive)
Lorenz said:

Monkeys eating like pigs ,
I kill the king on the cheese board.

December 5th, 2023 14:06

To Kill A...
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Ben, but I do wish that little black book could be pink and full of love for all.

Andy

December 5th, 2023 02:49

To Kill A...
JuneM said:

I love this poem so much! You\'re very talented

December 4th, 2023 13:12

Barstool Gangster (for Shane MacGowan)
Thomas W Case said:

Great tribute.

December 3rd, 2023 14:15

Barstool Gangster (for Shane MacGowan)
Eugene S. said:

Nice memorial. Sounds very apropos.

Cheers to Shane!
For we are all the same!
All the same!

December 3rd, 2023 13:25

Fappy Meals (A Comment on “Fast Hands” in “Fast Food”)
Goldfinch60 said:

Business and money overtakes everything nowadays Ben.

Many many years ago in the last century, 1980\'s, my wife and I had a weekend at Folkestone on the Saturday lunch time we went to a Macdonalds and I swore I would never go to one ever again, I haven\'t!

Andy

November 23rd, 2023 02:52

Fappy Meals (A Comment on “Fast Hands” in “Fast Food”)
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant.

November 22nd, 2023 22:14

Not Built for Maintenance
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words Ben, in the current life we cannot maintain things any more they need replacing unlike my younger days and my parents days when things could be repaired, it is all money, money money nowadays!

Andy

November 22nd, 2023 02:07

Not Built for Maintenance
Teddy.15 said:

lol so very entertaining. ❤️

November 21st, 2023 15:49

Not Built for Maintenance
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful

November 21st, 2023 15:03

IOUA!
Goldfinch60 said:

Unfortunately respect seems to have flown from our life and apologising for wrongdoing doesn\'t happen Ben.
All each of us individuals can do is the best we can, I have been taught to be respectful and hope that through my long life I have always been that way and if I make a mistake I will always apologise. This way of life is not taught anymore which is a primal cause of the troubles in our world.
Good words Ben.

Andy

November 21st, 2023 01:50

IOUA!
l1a_09 said:

so beautiful

November 20th, 2023 13:50

Eleven (A Poem on Armistice 2023)
Teddy.15 said:

So very beautiful, I cannot get a poppy because I\'m in Italy however my parents put one on me every year when I was a child. A great thank you to the courageous men and women who faught for all our freedom, and lost their own. Kudos
❤️ 🤍 💙

November 12th, 2023 15:33

Eleven (A Poem on Armistice 2023)
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Ben, we were in our coffee house yesterday, 11th, and they had a sign saying that they would have a 2 minute silence at 11.00.
It happened and I stood up at attention as many others did but there were some there that showed no respect at all and this annoyed me.
\"WE WILL REMEMBER THEM.\"

Andy

November 12th, 2023 01:58

Eleven (A Poem on Armistice 2023)
Positive Girl said:

This is a beautiful remembrance. Thank you for sharing.

November 11th, 2023 17:16

Eleven (A Poem on Armistice 2023)
Bella Shepard said:

Thank you dear poet for this beautiful and fitting poem, on this day of remembrance, \"lest we forget\".

November 11th, 2023 14:38

Eleven (A Poem on Armistice 2023)
orchidee said:

A fine write AS. Great minds think.....? I too posted the roses pic today.

November 11th, 2023 13:16

If My Emblem Could Talk
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Great job.

November 11th, 2023 09:03

If My Emblem Could Talk
Goldfinch60 said:

Such strong and true words Ben, i do sincerely hope that we can change for the better soon otherwise the earth will be empty.

Andy

November 11th, 2023 02:16

If My Emblem Could Talk
Teddy.15 said:

I\'ve been to zoo\'s like that and I\'m living in times like these. I find your poetic heart so very empathetic always dear friend. 🩷

November 10th, 2023 13:34

A Carving on the Broken Bench of Humanity
Goldfinch60 said:

True words Dan, if only people could learn to do good individually the world would become a much better place.

Andy

November 8th, 2023 02:02

There Always is an Odd Sock, When Doing the Laundry
Sunsetmet said:

I love the title and what is truly behind the words this is lovely just what I needed to hear life is full of mistakes and also keeping on track a sock or two LOL

November 7th, 2023 07:16

There Always is an Odd Sock, When Doing the Laundry
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes we all make mistakes Ben and have to do things again but that is life and we just have to accept it.

Andy

November 7th, 2023 02:29

There Always is an Odd Sock, When Doing the Laundry
Teddy.15 said:

I have two they have been on my drawers for a week now, what a wonderful write. Your metaphor is brilliant. Let\'s hope we all find our missing socks. 🤗

November 7th, 2023 01:14

There Always is an Odd Sock, When Doing the Laundry
Bella Shepard said:

The odd sock is the bane of my life. I also spent the last 30 minutes backspacing, deleting and editing, and still haven\'t come up with a finished product, so it\'s out there somewhere with that sock. When something goes wrong in what we think is a perfect life it is a reality check, if we\'re wise. Unfortunately, in evades too many who claim perfection, when their flaws are on display. A very timely write my friend, we\'re going through this right now in our political forum, and it is very toxic. Kudos for your thoughts and voice!

November 6th, 2023 14:52

47 (A Poem in Homage to Adam Johnson, former Nottingham Panthers Ice Hockey Player)
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful tribute Ben. So young to have passed from this world.

Andy

November 5th, 2023 02:11

47 (A Poem in Homage to Adam Johnson, former Nottingham Panthers Ice Hockey Player)
Bella Shepard said:

A beautifuliful elegy. Sadly a life cut short, and a destiny denied. You have done him great honor.

November 2nd, 2023 14:46

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