Comments received on poems by phoenixsky2020
Endure
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks PHOENIX for another spiritual poem ~ beautifully phrased. You are a credit to MPS ! My experience matches yours ~ in a stressful 21st environment ~ Faith & Meditation are so so important. Thanks ~ Love BRIAN. Loved GABES song ~ please check my latest poem ~ MOUNTAIN STREAM ~ Thanks B
September 28th, 2016 04:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks PHOENIX for another spiritual poem ~ beautifully phrased. You are a credit to MPS ! My experience matches yours ~ in a stressful 21st environment ~ Faith & Meditation are so so important. Thanks ~ Love BRIAN. Loved GABES song ~ please check my latest poem ~ MOUNTAIN STREAM ~ Thanks B
September 28th, 2016 04:16
Endure
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written and then, the ending came as a complete shock yet it wrapped it up nicely...I like it
September 28th, 2016 02:10
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written and then, the ending came as a complete shock yet it wrapped it up nicely...I like it
September 28th, 2016 02:10
Compression
Augustus said:
"Faith is a bitch", I have heard, and especially so for those love lost. Nicely done.
September 12th, 2016 13:50
Augustus said:
"Faith is a bitch", I have heard, and especially so for those love lost. Nicely done.
September 12th, 2016 13:50
Compression
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great song and a Perfect Poem ~ Thanks for sharing PHOENIX ! We all have REGRETS (more as we get older) but PAUL said "This one thing I do ~ forgetting those things which are behind ~ I press on to the Prize of my calling in The Lord Jesus Christ ~ AMEN ! " This what th LORD want us to do ANGEL ~ not to be burdened by regrets but to SET OUR SAILS forward and brave all the storms of Life (and Love) with HIM ~ God Bless ~ Love BRIAN
September 12th, 2016 07:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great song and a Perfect Poem ~ Thanks for sharing PHOENIX ! We all have REGRETS (more as we get older) but PAUL said "This one thing I do ~ forgetting those things which are behind ~ I press on to the Prize of my calling in The Lord Jesus Christ ~ AMEN ! " This what th LORD want us to do ANGEL ~ not to be burdened by regrets but to SET OUR SAILS forward and brave all the storms of Life (and Love) with HIM ~ God Bless ~ Love BRIAN
September 12th, 2016 07:37
Healing
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS PHOENIX ~ Thanks for a triple whammy ! Great visual ~ Great song and a Great poem ! Yes every think is going to be OK in the end ! Keep yourself together ~ keep your eye on the Lord ~ always drink in moderation and PRAY ~ PRAY ~ PRAY ! Yours as ever BRIAN
August 25th, 2016 07:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS PHOENIX ~ Thanks for a triple whammy ! Great visual ~ Great song and a Great poem ! Yes every think is going to be OK in the end ! Keep yourself together ~ keep your eye on the Lord ~ always drink in moderation and PRAY ~ PRAY ~ PRAY ! Yours as ever BRIAN
August 25th, 2016 07:21
Healing
daniel dawes said:
Really liked this poem and it spoke to me on a deeper level about my present situation. Thanks for sharing.
August 25th, 2016 02:11
daniel dawes said:
Really liked this poem and it spoke to me on a deeper level about my present situation. Thanks for sharing.
August 25th, 2016 02:11
Senses
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI PHOENIX ~ Thanks for sharing another GABE ~ great to wake up to ~ wicked ! As you say our lives can become predictable and cyclic. But if we let GO and let GOD we can live a "Purpose Driven Life" which is full of surprises and twists and turns ! THE LORD WILL FIGHT FOR YOU ~ WHILE YOU SIT STILL ! Thanks for caring and sharing a very encouraging poem. Yours BRIAN
August 23rd, 2016 03:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI PHOENIX ~ Thanks for sharing another GABE ~ great to wake up to ~ wicked ! As you say our lives can become predictable and cyclic. But if we let GO and let GOD we can live a "Purpose Driven Life" which is full of surprises and twists and turns ! THE LORD WILL FIGHT FOR YOU ~ WHILE YOU SIT STILL ! Thanks for caring and sharing a very encouraging poem. Yours BRIAN
August 23rd, 2016 03:38
Changes
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great poem PHOENIX and a great song by GABE ~ I'll be around. Love the structure of you ode ~ rhyming one liners ~ wicked. ! To really experience LOVE we do have to get off the track ~ out of the rut and think laterally ! Some of my beat experience ~ love wise ~ have been when i broken all MY OWN RULES and just gone for it ~ wicked. Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN
August 22nd, 2016 03:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great poem PHOENIX and a great song by GABE ~ I'll be around. Love the structure of you ode ~ rhyming one liners ~ wicked. ! To really experience LOVE we do have to get off the track ~ out of the rut and think laterally ! Some of my beat experience ~ love wise ~ have been when i broken all MY OWN RULES and just gone for it ~ wicked. Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN
August 22nd, 2016 03:38
Untwisted
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME PHOENIX ~ Thank you for a well spaced and well penned first poem ~ replete with sweet and sour notes. I like the subtitle "Lessons from the past" we (Yang & Yin) can all empathise with that. In my own relationships with ladies I like to be "A Man who cares" "A Godly Man" but never (God forbid) "A crooked Man" or "An unjustified Man" who breaks hearts emotionally yet not physically. In this present debauched World ~ Phoenix ~ we have to chose our partners carefully. My experience is if my Ladies (I'm still single) are "Godly Ladies" then our relationship is always true and positive. Is this your experience with Men ? Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN
August 18th, 2016 10:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME PHOENIX ~ Thank you for a well spaced and well penned first poem ~ replete with sweet and sour notes. I like the subtitle "Lessons from the past" we (Yang & Yin) can all empathise with that. In my own relationships with ladies I like to be "A Man who cares" "A Godly Man" but never (God forbid) "A crooked Man" or "An unjustified Man" who breaks hearts emotionally yet not physically. In this present debauched World ~ Phoenix ~ we have to chose our partners carefully. My experience is if my Ladies (I'm still single) are "Godly Ladies" then our relationship is always true and positive. Is this your experience with Men ? Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN
August 18th, 2016 10:06
