Comments received on poems by happy feet
when we broke up
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmmm. Excellent depiction of heartbreak, especially in the case of deceit and false love.
February 17th, 2011 00:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmmm. Excellent depiction of heartbreak, especially in the case of deceit and false love.
February 17th, 2011 00:39
how could you??
Cheeky Missy said:
Very good. You've expressed it very well....ah, the horrid realization of the dreaded fears! The heartbreak to face afterall.....you aptly expressed it...and I still hate those words...need more time....it proves the crushing reality of being used. The funny thing is that only one of my boyfriends ever used a letter to break up with me, and it was the first boyfriend. Coincidentally, the relationship had been chilling anyway, especially me, so it was no heartbreak my case. Your title is excellent...great job! I like it.
January 28th, 2011 23:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Very good. You've expressed it very well....ah, the horrid realization of the dreaded fears! The heartbreak to face afterall.....you aptly expressed it...and I still hate those words...need more time....it proves the crushing reality of being used. The funny thing is that only one of my boyfriends ever used a letter to break up with me, and it was the first boyfriend. Coincidentally, the relationship had been chilling anyway, especially me, so it was no heartbreak my case. Your title is excellent...great job! I like it.
January 28th, 2011 23:18
If i could only
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. This is VERY sweet! The love you express in it is so delightful...hope sneaky likes it. I enjoyed it.
January 26th, 2011 20:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. This is VERY sweet! The love you express in it is so delightful...hope sneaky likes it. I enjoyed it.
January 26th, 2011 20:39
The day you left
Cheeky Missy said:
Yikes! She was only 18! It is a very beautiful, tender and sweet tribute to and memento of your dear friend. You almost make your readers miss her as well. And the picture so perfectly fits with your concluding words. You expressed your memories and loving sentiments very nicely. Excellent!
January 25th, 2011 23:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Yikes! She was only 18! It is a very beautiful, tender and sweet tribute to and memento of your dear friend. You almost make your readers miss her as well. And the picture so perfectly fits with your concluding words. You expressed your memories and loving sentiments very nicely. Excellent!
January 25th, 2011 23:33
My Breakup
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, intriguing, sad.....in the miserable age-old theme of breaking up and heartbroken heartache. "Sneaky" sounds like a good name for the character the speaker is addressing. What is the speaker? It sounds at times like a girl, and at others like a guy. The picture goes nicely with it. You depicted the betrayed lover's response very well.
January 21st, 2011 16:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, intriguing, sad.....in the miserable age-old theme of breaking up and heartbroken heartache. "Sneaky" sounds like a good name for the character the speaker is addressing. What is the speaker? It sounds at times like a girl, and at others like a guy. The picture goes nicely with it. You depicted the betrayed lover's response very well.
January 21st, 2011 16:15
