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Quemis said:

Love the word choice and the order in any specific line, although some of the lines are a bit dissonant when put together.

To me anyway - a sucker for traditional rhyming schemes who never jumped on the prose or modern trains.

So dont take it personal.

Great job! : )

December 9th, 2016 00:55

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Augustus said:

This has like a masochistic twist to it. Interesting.

December 7th, 2016 23:19