Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
A Love Story
Doggerel Dave said:
That title - l very nearly passed this by - almost didn\'t stop....
Exceedingly glad I did not.
A rant worth ranting. Absolutely no need for an apology. Enjoyed greatly - My circulation is much improved after that read, Phil.
PS: Couldn\'t get a proper handle on K. B. Morrison. Care to enlighten?
October 1st, 2022 20:29
Doggerel Dave said:
That title - l very nearly passed this by - almost didn\'t stop....
Exceedingly glad I did not.
A rant worth ranting. Absolutely no need for an apology. Enjoyed greatly - My circulation is much improved after that read, Phil.
PS: Couldn\'t get a proper handle on K. B. Morrison. Care to enlighten?
October 1st, 2022 20:29
A Different Man
Morwenna said:
Such a simple format to contain such a deep thought. Brilliant.
October 1st, 2022 09:13
Morwenna said:
Such a simple format to contain such a deep thought. Brilliant.
October 1st, 2022 09:13
A Different Man
orchidee said:
Good write MF.
Ahh, you\'re a ghost-writer now! Doh, corny joke there! lol.
October 1st, 2022 02:15
orchidee said:
Good write MF.
Ahh, you\'re a ghost-writer now! Doh, corny joke there! lol.
October 1st, 2022 02:15
A Different Man
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful emotive words Phil.
Glad you are back.
Andy
October 1st, 2022 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful emotive words Phil.
Glad you are back.
Andy
October 1st, 2022 01:54
A Different Man
Neville said:
and it aint half good havin you back sir ........ I am so glad I stopped by ..
September 30th, 2022 12:54
Neville said:
and it aint half good havin you back sir ........ I am so glad I stopped by ..
September 30th, 2022 12:54
La Danse Apache
Neville said:
Seriously good sir .. They say that fact is often stranger than fiction don\'t they ..
I must confess, due to my former ignorance, I also had a great deal of fun researching your characters Mistinguett and Max (note the e being deliberately removed) Neville
September 30th, 2022 12:51
Neville said:
Seriously good sir .. They say that fact is often stranger than fiction don\'t they ..
I must confess, due to my former ignorance, I also had a great deal of fun researching your characters Mistinguett and Max (note the e being deliberately removed) Neville
September 30th, 2022 12:51
A Different Man
Fay Slimm. said:
This read filled my heart with the tragedy of love lost when parted by long distance - - Phil you captured the feeling of desolation when a loved one boards ship or plane with Goodbye - -- a favourite thisone for sure.
September 30th, 2022 12:20
Fay Slimm. said:
This read filled my heart with the tragedy of love lost when parted by long distance - - Phil you captured the feeling of desolation when a loved one boards ship or plane with Goodbye - -- a favourite thisone for sure.
September 30th, 2022 12:20
Burning Roses
Neville said:
love can be bloody brutal sometimes ..
you sir Phil are the master of this poetic genre sir ............. Neville
September 4th, 2022 03:56
Neville said:
love can be bloody brutal sometimes ..
you sir Phil are the master of this poetic genre sir ............. Neville
September 4th, 2022 03:56
Burning Roses
Dr. Soma said:
The story is heart-touching.Thanks for sharing.
September 4th, 2022 03:45
Dr. Soma said:
The story is heart-touching.Thanks for sharing.
September 4th, 2022 03:45
Burning Roses
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh poor Tom and poor Jack of course
- what a sad end to a woman\'s dilemma -- you have such a way with conjuring tales Phil - this read brought me so close to tears and goes to my faves.
September 3rd, 2022 09:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh poor Tom and poor Jack of course
- what a sad end to a woman\'s dilemma -- you have such a way with conjuring tales Phil - this read brought me so close to tears and goes to my faves.
September 3rd, 2022 09:50
The Words We Spoke
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be with you Phil no matter what words are spoken.
Andy
September 3rd, 2022 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be with you Phil no matter what words are spoken.
Andy
September 3rd, 2022 01:34
The Words We Spoke
Doggerel Dave said:
You captured the dynamic of a long term relationship to perfection there, Phil. I felt and could identify with every development, the passing of time…
And so was my time with your work well spent here.
Thanks
September 2nd, 2022 19:07
Doggerel Dave said:
You captured the dynamic of a long term relationship to perfection there, Phil. I felt and could identify with every development, the passing of time…
And so was my time with your work well spent here.
Thanks
September 2nd, 2022 19:07
Love So Deep
Lincoln said:
Wow! I must say I\'m impressed
This artwork got me thinking allday
September 2nd, 2022 16:24
Lincoln said:
Wow! I must say I\'m impressed
This artwork got me thinking allday
September 2nd, 2022 16:24
The Words We Spoke
Fay Slimm. said:
A wise and tender look at what happens to love over years -- those final lines say it all Phil. A beautiful read and it goes to my favourites.
September 2nd, 2022 13:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A wise and tender look at what happens to love over years -- those final lines say it all Phil. A beautiful read and it goes to my favourites.
September 2nd, 2022 13:05
The Words We Spoke
shaa said:
I really enjoyed the last part, felt like the cherry on top. Its a lovely piece. I love it
September 2nd, 2022 12:55
shaa said:
I really enjoyed the last part, felt like the cherry on top. Its a lovely piece. I love it
September 2nd, 2022 12:55
Love So Deep
Neville said:
I would say a story wrapped securely within a prose poem .. a compelling read from one end to the other ..
ps -
The shiver down my spine at the conclusion is a clear indication, to me at least, that it was indeed a fine example of poetic prose ..
Neville
September 2nd, 2022 02:27
Neville said:
I would say a story wrapped securely within a prose poem .. a compelling read from one end to the other ..
ps -
The shiver down my spine at the conclusion is a clear indication, to me at least, that it was indeed a fine example of poetic prose ..
Neville
September 2nd, 2022 02:27
Love So Deep
Fay Slimm. said:
I could hardly breathe as the tragedy struck in this tale of love and loss Phil - -- so sadly special and truth or not I was captivated by your vivid telling.
September 1st, 2022 01:32
Fay Slimm. said:
I could hardly breathe as the tragedy struck in this tale of love and loss Phil - -- so sadly special and truth or not I was captivated by your vivid telling.
September 1st, 2022 01:32
Love So Deep
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Phil and so well written, I was hooked.
Andy
September 1st, 2022 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Phil and so well written, I was hooked.
Andy
September 1st, 2022 01:11
Love So Deep
Doggerel Dave said:
Either way, one hell of a tale, Phil, very real in the telling. Pulled me in.
And I have to ask:
August 31st, 2022 23:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Either way, one hell of a tale, Phil, very real in the telling. Pulled me in.
And I have to ask:
August 31st, 2022 23:56
Yearlong
Neville said:
this has more than just a hint of an autobiographical flavour to it .. and the aftertaste is oh\' so sweet ... if I had favourites Phil, this would surely be among them ........ Neville
August 30th, 2022 12:54
Neville said:
this has more than just a hint of an autobiographical flavour to it .. and the aftertaste is oh\' so sweet ... if I had favourites Phil, this would surely be among them ........ Neville
August 30th, 2022 12:54
Yearlong
orchidee said:
Good write MF.
See ya then - in Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, whenever!
August 29th, 2022 03:31
orchidee said:
Good write MF.
See ya then - in Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, whenever!
August 29th, 2022 03:31
Yearlong
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Phil, those fours seasons can bring such different thoughts in l our love.
Andy
August 29th, 2022 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Phil, those fours seasons can bring such different thoughts in l our love.
Andy
August 29th, 2022 01:35
Yearlong
Fay Slimm. said:
The journey back to our lover can be hazardly long and you pen the seasons it takes to find happy endings so well Phil. I love the first stanza of cold winter\'s bitter-sweet parting. A favourite for me is your Yearlong.
August 28th, 2022 18:15
Fay Slimm. said:
The journey back to our lover can be hazardly long and you pen the seasons it takes to find happy endings so well Phil. I love the first stanza of cold winter\'s bitter-sweet parting. A favourite for me is your Yearlong.
August 28th, 2022 18:15
One drink down
Neville said:
the girls have got you sussed Phil .. ... I agree entirely with the combined voices of both Teddy and Fay ... Neville
August 24th, 2022 11:31
Neville said:
the girls have got you sussed Phil .. ... I agree entirely with the combined voices of both Teddy and Fay ... Neville
August 24th, 2022 11:31
Crusin\' to reality
Doggerel Dave said:
As a metaphor, i think I can take it, Phil. As a description of an actual cruise, you have evoked an old memory and reminded me of my allergy...
August 24th, 2022 07:35
Doggerel Dave said:
As a metaphor, i think I can take it, Phil. As a description of an actual cruise, you have evoked an old memory and reminded me of my allergy...
August 24th, 2022 07:35
Crusin\' to reality
Goldfinch60 said:
I am on that cruise Phil and hopefully for a long time to come.
Andy
August 24th, 2022 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
I am on that cruise Phil and hopefully for a long time to come.
Andy
August 24th, 2022 01:05
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