Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



The Boat of Pleasant Dreams.
orchidee said:

Great write. You on that boat when you\'re dreaming?! Ahh, you won\'t fall off the edge of the world then, as you\'re sailing to infinity. Erm, did the boat sail back in time too, to 1066?

March 10th, 2017 02:57

Custer.
Augustus said:

Holy Mackerel was a common expression when I was younger. Don\'t hear it much any more. Was perfect for the photo you drew in our minds.

March 9th, 2017 16:08

Custer.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

hell of a story my friend ,but it sounded about right

March 9th, 2017 12:16

Custer.
orchidee said:

So you were there then, via your ancestors! I expect I was there too. as we both were in 1066. Good write. Tee Hee.

March 9th, 2017 10:58

Custer.
vvnrose said:

Excellent poem with history to be told.

March 9th, 2017 08:59

Custer.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you tepo.

March 9th, 2017 08:54

Custer.
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha love this..
Now that\'s put
A smile on my face
Well done sir.....
Not just for the
Smile but this
Really good work

March 9th, 2017 07:47

Custer.
WriteBeLight said:

That is just great work Goldfinch.

March 9th, 2017 06:36

Custer.
willyweed said:

Good advise George should have listened sometimes we get just what is deserved. love the history in this. nice one Goldy!

March 9th, 2017 06:22

Custer.
Michael Edwards said:

Oh just brilliant - in fact one of my favourites - great metre and such fun - in fact I\'ll pop it in favourites.

March 9th, 2017 03:06

Custer.
Hypothesis said:

This was quite a story that several individuals till this day can relate with. Wealth is an indulging moment that shows or depicts the true behavior of a human being. No matter the flaws or incentives being made.

Good story nonetheless poet.

March 9th, 2017 02:51

Vacancies.
Augustus said:

Kind of stuffy for my tastes. lol. Wow! On the edge of my seat. Love it!

March 8th, 2017 17:33

Vacancies.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Stuffed animals and disappeared tenants.!! Oh my that was a creepy bloodcurdling surprise for me. But glad that this is imagination and the thrill of a dark write. Kudos.

U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too , pls do.

March 8th, 2017 15:29

Vacancies.
willyweed said:

Oh what an honor and me looking for a boarding house, I knew you would have a dark and creepy write and I was so right I will save as fav you bloody mucker o mine thank you kind Sir! oh and now I feel stuffed? thank you Goldfinch for sure! WW

March 8th, 2017 07:39

Vacancies.
WriteBeLight said:

So creepy. Great Job!

March 8th, 2017 07:01

Vacancies.
Michael Edwards said:

Yes it ended up dark after starting out light - quite a read - and love the format - yes I really enjoyed it

March 8th, 2017 03:19

Vacancies.
orchidee said:

A fine write.

March 8th, 2017 03:16

Morpheus Sings.
Augustus said:

Cavitina is \"small simple song in Italian\". Did not know that . Said so when I looked it up. I loved the guitar version on YouTube. I sang tenor for many years in choirs so can relate to how that would be inspiring. Well done.

March 7th, 2017 19:14

Morpheus Sings.
willyweed said:

beautiful music to sooth the beast in all , now I guess I do sound like a cat in heat when I sing and play? nice piece golden!

March 7th, 2017 12:03

Morpheus Sings.
WriteBeLight said:

Such beautiful words.

March 7th, 2017 04:16

Morpheus Sings.
Michael Edwards said:

Great stuff and I loved Cleo

March 7th, 2017 03:07

Morpheus Sings.
orchidee said:

A fine write.

March 7th, 2017 02:56

Dementia - Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Augustus, I try to take care.

March 6th, 2017 12:37

Dementia - Senryu
Augustus said:

Great emotional write, a slipping that is so hard to stop. Don\'t forget to take care of yourself. Hugs.

March 6th, 2017 12:32

Dementia - Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you DS I know that you understand.

March 6th, 2017 09:06

Dementia - Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Tony.

March 6th, 2017 08:57

Dementia - Senryu
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed in such few words. Great write

March 6th, 2017 08:47

Dementia - Senryu
WriteBeLight said:

Yes, unfortunately true and poignant. I wish her and you the best.

March 6th, 2017 06:38

Dementia - Senryu
willyweed said:

This brings much sadness to my heart & soul I am sorry! ww

March 6th, 2017 05:45

Dementia - Senryu
Michael Edwards said:

So sorry to hear about your wife - this is such a great Senyu written with such feeling.

March 6th, 2017 03:04



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