Comments on community poems by Gary Edward Geraci

• Memories of Yesterday (Nicholas Browning) Great diction for “only 21” and an impressive number of lines for...
  May 6th, 2018 21:25
• it aint our summer (Dusk arising) The ever changing seasons are a great metaphor for our ever changing...
  May 6th, 2018 21:20
• THE PICNIC (Laura🌻) A delight to read and a wonderful family tradition. I pray you now share...
  May 6th, 2018 20:48
• on writing (Onepauly) I love the traditional rhyme work OnePauly and the asymmetry of your 5...
  May 6th, 2018 20:39
• Death is indiscriminate (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) In Christian eschatology the four last things are: Death, Judgment,...
  April 18th, 2018 20:53
• Suffering Servants - Epistles of Peter Series - 4 (Orchidee) John Paul II wrote a wonderful Apostolic Letter “Salvifici Doloris”...
  April 18th, 2018 20:43
• Beach Dineing (Onepauly) Life is good from the perspective of this poem onepauly; life indeed is a...
  April 18th, 2018 20:17
• Have Pity on Us (Gary Edward Geraci) There’s a spark of God’s image (and it follows for us Trinitarian...
  April 7th, 2018 08:32
• Surround Yourself With People (Brooklyn6timesplus) Brooklyn you never disappoint and I always like ending my night with...
  March 28th, 2018 23:00
• Depression (Jewels) Great piece of “confessional” poetry. Your readers might also benefit...
  March 28th, 2018 22:56
• Govan lass (written in Glesga slang) (Jewels) Refreshing to see something like this every now and then. A good write and...
  March 28th, 2018 22:53
• Only happiness (Haylee Owen) Nice imagery and you get quite close, perhaps without intending it, to the...
  March 28th, 2018 22:50
• Communication (ForeverJesus7) Spot on! And my spiritual directors are always encouraging me to try to...
  March 28th, 2018 22:47
• ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic) (Laura🌻) Spot on Laura; a fine family poem.
  March 23rd, 2018 22:52
• The Godly And Ungodly (Orchidee) Fine write Orchidee. The Holy Spirit moved your pen well. To contemplate...
  March 17th, 2018 08:54
• Lucifer Sighs (Poelove) St. Lucifer of Cagliari was a defender of the deity of Christ and of St....
  March 5th, 2018 15:12
• Empathy (Poelove) I sense a common motif in several pieces of your work: the hypocrisy of...
  March 5th, 2018 14:55
• Trusting In Troubled Times (Orchidee) Indeed He deals with us bountifully; especially when we can consciously...
  March 5th, 2018 14:22
• Social Media Platforms for the Abstract and Beautiful (Gary Edward Geraci) Thank you Orchidee. How would we survive without our Tweets and Texts?
  March 5th, 2018 14:17
• Popular (NikitaPassmore) God’s Love for you is real. He surrounds you with many signs and real...
  February 27th, 2018 00:05
• Patient Persuals (Orchidee) Nice write Orchidee. I live in a small city in Texas, USA called Temple....
  February 19th, 2018 23:54
• You Bled and Died (for It) (Gary Edward Geraci) Thank you Orchidee for your read and comment!
  February 19th, 2018 23:41
• VITRIOL (Laura🌻) Nice ‘acrostic like’ “VITRIOL” interspersed throughout your your...
  February 19th, 2018 23:39
• Why Can\'t You See? (Tris Eaton) Most definitely, your writing, will prove to be a form of therapy when it...
  February 19th, 2018 23:09
• I Begin (Gary Edward Geraci) Yes, no need to make haste although that’s my default posture.... Thanks...
  January 31st, 2018 23:57
• Peter\'s Progress - Twelve Disciples Series - 2 (Orchidee) Well done! You make me a proud Peter (the name I chose for my Catholic...
  January 31st, 2018 23:54
• One In the Same Flock (Gary Edward Geraci) LOL! That puts us in good company Hood; with Pope Francis too; he puts...
  January 21st, 2018 14:38
• Paradise Party (Orchidee) Beautiful piece Orchidee; read while a inspirational choral piece was...
  January 21st, 2018 14:25
• Relationship Roots - Good News Series - 1 (Orchidee) The book of Genesis and beauty are inseparable. We may say the same about...
  January 18th, 2018 00:04
• LOVE\'S CYCLE (Michael Edwards) The tetrameter gives each line a respectable cadence; well wrought...
  January 17th, 2018 23:59
• God, Our Mother (Aislinn Wilson) Nice. I might read it as one having a conversation with God - the Infinite...
  January 17th, 2018 23:51
• I\'m Aware (KR) Hate, pistols, knives, suicide ideations....please seek NAMI if it gets...
  January 10th, 2018 23:56
• bad girls who do bad things (Draculazy) You’re not really a bad girl; perhaps a bit confused as was I;...
  January 10th, 2018 23:48
• Sensitive soul (MelanieSkyes) Keep speaking through your poems. I recognize and appreciate your efforts...
  January 10th, 2018 23:42
• Weakness (Poetboy123) A creative form and use of word repetition. I get that an object that is...
  January 10th, 2018 23:41
• Prayer And Praise (Orchidee) Well done orchidee.
  January 10th, 2018 23:33
• Pleasant Praisings (Orchidee) Praise God! With the psalms as your water and fertilizer, your tree bears...
  December 30th, 2017 12:45
• I saw You (Gary Edward Geraci) Thank you orchidee!
  December 28th, 2017 15:50
• When We Were Kids. (Kevin browne) Wow, what a ride Kevin and what a great time you write about here. Long...
  December 16th, 2017 22:43
• JUST ONE JESUS (Zizi) Jesus came to reveal to us how we may activate our “fullness”; to live...
  December 10th, 2017 20:34
• yours (Mich3) Nice end rhymes. I think getting beyond the raw feelings and learning to...
  December 10th, 2017 20:28
• \"The last call\" (Kiya16) Love until the end; we’ll never know when we’ll get that last call -...
  December 10th, 2017 20:22
• The Glimmering River (Deepthoughts) Glimmering rivers are best enjoyed while living. NAMI encouragement for...
  December 10th, 2017 20:19
• My Heavy Cup. (Catatonyx) Love it! Great use of repetition, internal rhyme, and alliteration....
  December 10th, 2017 20:15
• Why I loved you (SorrowfullyHappy) All the right reasons to love; you write! Unrequited love usually happens...
  December 10th, 2017 20:06
• Escape (Masking) Escape from vice and moral ineptitude is possible; I’m living proof (but...
  December 10th, 2017 20:02
• Sweet Dreams (Reinedefleur) Yes indeed; One Person!
  December 10th, 2017 19:59
• Points of View (B-LAH-que) The poem confronts the sticky issue of “toleration”. We aren’t...
  December 10th, 2017 19:52
• Blessings (Laura🌻) Gratitude and thanksgiving indeed; a great message Laura.
  December 5th, 2017 22:29
• Mankind in Dreamland (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) A fun read Kamoonpury - a poem of a horizon where everything is probable -...
  November 29th, 2017 23:58
• That thing that you do with your hands... (Gary Edward Geraci) Eyes closed, hands open, sitting, kneeling, standing, chanting - to pray...
  November 18th, 2017 13:00
• Presence Protection - Thomas á Kempis Series - 5 (Orchidee) Nice execution with the rhymes - they draw one down into the wellspring of...
  November 18th, 2017 12:54
• Persisting Praises (Orchidee) Your treatment of these verses inspired me to go to several of the...
  November 13th, 2017 23:03
• When I Breath. (Kevin browne) Yours here is a writing style that I am familiar with and quite fond of:...
  November 13th, 2017 22:54
• Bas-Relief on Canvas (Gary Edward Geraci) Hood, thank you for your candid reply and for remaining open to a...
  November 5th, 2017 12:52
• A Single Tear (Ron parrish aka wordman) The answer comes in the silence! A great book that expounds upon this deep...
  November 1st, 2017 17:16
• \"The Rain\" (Pop639) Nice use of alliteration in this work. Where I’m coming from, that is...
  October 29th, 2017 23:01
• Observer (Kimi brockley) Kimi - please pick up a copy of “Who Am I to Judge? Responding to...
  October 29th, 2017 22:54
• Where is me? (JamieDayDream) The beat goes on brother; now with the pen. Check the NAMI (USA) site for...
  October 29th, 2017 22:46
• Girl, It Is You And I (Brooklyn6timesplus) Love like this is indissoluble Brooklyn!
  October 29th, 2017 22:42
• I was going to write a poem (Bay) Because to write from the heart good poet is to correspond with God....
  October 29th, 2017 22:38
• Lost (Bay) We must learn to love ourselves as God loves us: unconditionally....
  October 29th, 2017 22:20
• The joy of the soul (Charlie) The two transcendentals here, beauty in love among true friends and home,...
  October 29th, 2017 21:46
• True Love (Brandyngraham) True lust rather....Good write Lando; unfortunately you’re inking truth...
  October 29th, 2017 21:37
• Is It Love (Ron parrish aka wordman) Your pen aptly describes the universal longing...because we were all loved...
  October 29th, 2017 21:32
• Just Cry (Mindysueh) Your poem proves that your inner spirit already knows the contraries...
  October 29th, 2017 21:08
• edmund fitzgerald, tom petty, and elwood walk into a bar (Abora) Been there and done that Abora. The poem screams of the dissatisfaction...
  October 29th, 2017 20:52
• Communing Continuings (Orchidee) Bravo! A superb, truth bearing write orchidee. One gains an elevated sense...
  October 22nd, 2017 15:44
• Memory Divine (Gary Edward Geraci) Thank you orchidee for your read and comment!
  October 22nd, 2017 15:13
• Moments (Bing) I love ending the evening with a good, well formed piece of art and it is...
  October 16th, 2017 23:01
• I was and Now i Am (Angelablankenship) Thanks for bearing your cross in this first, encouraging post of yours....
  October 16th, 2017 22:52
• We Lift And Inspire (Brooklyn6timesplus) One kid at a time, one soul at a time! Great message Brooklyn.
  October 16th, 2017 22:30
• Let Us Just Forget (MaxWritesPoems) Let us forget instead that we are merely a product of our intransigent,...
  October 12th, 2017 23:08
• A Selfless Child (Seeker123) You’ve taken effort to write a good biography about yourself...thank...
  October 12th, 2017 22:55
• < > (Sara Michelle) A good start. Indeed the Spirit moves within each us...loving us and...
  October 12th, 2017 22:41
• What the Sky Sacrificed (InsouciantRebellions) There’s a vagueness in your poem that I can’t quite seem to reconcile....
  October 11th, 2017 23:06
• What to do? (MCaron3797) The “lighter side” of your take of the whole situation comes out in...
  October 11th, 2017 22:48
• I\'m scared of something that barely exists (Anxiety) The poem describes the untenable position of surrendering one’s peace to...
  October 11th, 2017 22:38
• A Poet That Does Not Rhyme (Dorian Dark) You’re quite welcome Dorian. I’m pleased, to say the least, to see...
  October 9th, 2017 13:40
• Do Unto Others (Haiku) (Mugsdaddy) As of late I\'ve found the opposite works best for me, the sincere gift of...
  October 8th, 2017 22:55
• A Story about Another Poet. (Kevin browne) A nice reflection about the important pastime of contemplation and...
  October 8th, 2017 22:51
• A Poet That Does Not Rhyme (Dorian Dark) Many will relate as such is the fate of secular nihilism. There\'s always...
  October 8th, 2017 22:36
• Pure Happiness (Hboo) Praise God! An inspiration to any one else that indeed there is light at...
  October 8th, 2017 22:29
• Eating Beauty (Gary Edward Geraci) We partake in the glorified body of our Lord; hence no cannibalism. It\'s...
  September 30th, 2017 22:36
• T.H.E (ZamoneAnderson) I like this piece Zamone - it exudes rhythm and beat. \"TERMS of speech...
  September 27th, 2017 21:17
• Chained (MereGolden) Keep the wings and fix your gaze on the light. Nice expression. I\'ll...
  September 27th, 2017 21:09
• Dog chases Fly (Davidivad98) Nice work David. The souls of both the dog and the fly are equally...
  September 27th, 2017 21:06
• Sunset Wine (F.G. Franklin) You aptly and colorfully describe the life that dominated a good thirty...
  September 16th, 2017 15:10
• Falling Into Freedom (Edthepoet) Nice near and end rhyme (abab cdcd efef ghghgh) and predominate, trimeter...
  September 16th, 2017 14:50
• The Manics Said It Best (Edthepoet) Pervasive final stanza! This irrational evil will be defeated and in...
  September 16th, 2017 14:31
• Nightmares (Kailie Jackson) But the light will always outshine our fright. Watch your compound word...
  September 15th, 2017 23:05
• Thunderstorm (Kaden Hudson) Your love for writing and nature is as refreshing as that thunderstorm and...
  September 15th, 2017 23:01
• I Look At Her (Peter Balkus) And remember whom you are looking at: a Queen in the eyes of God;...
  September 15th, 2017 22:58
• Ruins (Mary73223) But I will be the mighty beacon in the light house illuminating your...
  September 15th, 2017 22:53
• Ghost in my age (ScatterMax) A great write to explicate the compounding of darkness when one lives in a...
  September 15th, 2017 22:49
• Untitled (SarahLouise) Nice internal rhymes like rose buds to my senses; ah yeah \"phase\" and...
  September 12th, 2017 23:04
• Anyone remember me (ReloadTheWorld) Very eager to...come to think of it! In fact, I\'m quite confident that...
  September 12th, 2017 22:58
• I am Darkness (Kailie Jackson) Strike a simple little match and suddenly your darkness is no longer a...
  September 12th, 2017 22:47
• there\'s hope, there\'s joy (Rrodriguez) Right on; I\'m with you all the way brother! Our cardinal virtues are...
  September 12th, 2017 22:41
• Watch Me (Joy Fetherolf) The best cure for self doubt is your gift of self to others. Your poem...
  September 12th, 2017 22:38