Comments on community poems by Garry
- Deep Down (JustABird)
Love the starting point. Really good to hear how people get started on a...
March 22nd, 2017 17:04 - Empty Pockets (Edthepoet)
Looked at three of your poems so far, Enjoyed them all looking forward to...
March 22nd, 2017 16:51 - Ransom (Edthepoet)
Too good for a country and western song😯, Though it would work ad...
March 22nd, 2017 16:49 - Miles and Miles (Edthepoet)
Very good. Really enjoyed the rythms and the flow. Good \'story\' too.
March 22nd, 2017 16:46 - Candle (Caden_Mercer10)
A deep sense of loss portrayed through the simple image of a candle. Well...
March 21st, 2017 16:33 - 21 March 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
Beautiful. Lovely phrases.
March 21st, 2017 16:27 - Scapegoat (Quemis)
A good read, effective use of alliteration.
March 21st, 2017 06:36 - Towards That Place. (Goldfinch60)
Though conversely who was it who said
\"the saddest words in the English...
March 21st, 2017 06:32 - Towards That Place. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s often the twists and turns and changes of direction that provide...
March 21st, 2017 06:30 - She. (Goldfinch60)
Evocative of so many things. Full of life. Loved the last verse...
March 21st, 2017 03:16 - Sex life of writers (MendedFences27)
Certainly made me smile. Some excellent ideas and lovely phrases.
March 21st, 2017 03:07 - MELANIA TRUMP ~ A MODEL FIRST LADY ! An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good job, given the constraints of the fornat. Are you doing one for...
March 21st, 2017 03:03 - Tribute (JJCooke)
Love it. Deep but not intellectual for the sake of it.
March 20th, 2017 17:00 - She Shines (JJCooke)
Bleak. Time will tell. Very much enjoyed this. .
Thank you
March 20th, 2017 16:58 - Nightmare (JJCooke)
Very dark. Hope you don\'t really y have the dream all the time. Lay off...
March 20th, 2017 16:56
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