Comments received on poems by Maxine Smith



H.E.L.P
FredPeyer said:

An exquisitely written S.O.S.! Maybe P should stand for \'Picking up the pieces\'.

March 4th, 2020 18:07

H.E.L.P
Saxon Crow said:

Got to pick the pieces up
Love yourself once more
Use the people you care about
Enough to get you strong

March 2nd, 2020 10:06

H.E.L.P
Fay Slimm said:

A sad acrostic with a second line to spell out the reason why the final words often become a way of life - a piece to ponder dear Maxine.

March 2nd, 2020 03:49

H.E.L.P
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a powerful write Maxine, I do hope this is not you you have so much more to give to us all.

Andy

March 2nd, 2020 02:29

H.E.L.P
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Maxine.
Meanwhile - ya ain\'t got anything to be loathing, except if I start singing! heehee.

March 2nd, 2020 02:24

H.E.L.P
Poetic Dan said:

Wow... Hard hitting, if this is your own wave, there will be brighter days!

Much peace and respect

March 1st, 2020 23:59

H.E.L.P
ron parrish aka wordman said:

broken hearts,broken dreams

March 1st, 2020 17:24

H.E.L.P
Neville said:


Now this is what I call sad...

crying out for help and not being heard

x



March 1st, 2020 15:41

Double Trouble
orchidee said:

Are they \'cute\'? On their off-days/off-times too?! heehee.

February 18th, 2020 03:07

Double Trouble
myself and me said:

Beautiful and lovely kids. Such a blessing.

February 17th, 2020 20:36

Double Trouble
Fay Slimm said:

Two gorgeously looking bundles of fun and no doubt loved to bits - -such fun-words of love written from your warm heart - -- a delight to read Maxine.

February 17th, 2020 17:02

Double Trouble
Jeremy Leach said:

That\'s really well written and lovely pics. I like your highlighted letters of Double Trouble woven through it all too - very clever !

February 17th, 2020 15:51

Double Trouble
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Great words Maxine and beautiful pictures.
Have a great day with them.

Ex animo, Alan

February 17th, 2020 03:53

Double Trouble
Poetic Dan said:

What a beautiful picture and your so right, mine are seen and heard with pure delight. The old ways are gone as we feel them with pride!

Fantastic vibe!

February 17th, 2020 03:41

It’s okay not to be okay ❤️
Poetic Dan said:

Wow felt this to my core, keep riding those waves as one day you will be soaring high. To look back at your rhymes and know that it\'s now better times

Much peace and respect

February 17th, 2020 03:39

Double Trouble
dusk arising said:

That\'s the way to do it. Tongue in cheek verse about two lil rascals.

Cor.. bigger font next time please... us ageing poets have trouble reading the small print.

February 17th, 2020 03:36

Double Trouble
Laura said:

Maxine,

OMG...
They are adorable!
Thank you for sharing the photo.

A wonderful write!
I like the way you highlighted the title of your poem within the write!
Cleverly executed!

~Laura~🌻

February 17th, 2020 03:02

Double Trouble
Michael Edwards said:

Lovely kids - the heart melts - and a great write too. It\'s a good day.

February 17th, 2020 02:48

Double Trouble
orchidee said:

Good write and lovely pic Maxine. Oh yes, on the surface - butter wouldn\'t melt in their mouths. It\'s the same with me dog, Fido, ya know! lol.

February 17th, 2020 02:47

Double Trouble
Goldfinch60 said:

Great write about two adorable looking children Maxine.

Andy

February 17th, 2020 02:36

It’s okay not to be okay ❤️
Goldfinch60 said:

Those times come to us all Maxine but they can be dispersed in time and in the flow of words written on the page.

Andy

February 16th, 2020 16:17

It’s okay not to be okay ❤️
Saxon Crow said:

Hey Maxine. Awesomelly relatable poem. And yes, it is perfectly normal to feel every emotion of the spectrum. Whoever says otherwise clesrly isnt a human being!

February 16th, 2020 13:29

It’s okay not to be okay ❤️
Unsub said:

The image is like the mantra I chant before sleep.

Powerful write.

Unsub.

February 16th, 2020 11:48

It’s okay not to be okay ❤️
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Well done for writing this Maxine. Helpful to others I think,
Take it easy.

Ex animo, Alan

February 16th, 2020 09:30

It’s okay not to be okay ❤️
Laura said:

Maxine,

I feel your words through and through! It is refreshing to be able to recognize and admit when we don’t feel well! That is part of the healing process...I suppose!

A much appreciated and wonderful write!

~Laura~🌻

February 16th, 2020 08:35

It’s okay not to be okay ❤️
Neville said:

This is a great poem my friend and one which I know many will be able relate to... I suspect that those same sufferers will feel better knowing that they are not alone...

All Good Things,

Neville

February 16th, 2020 08:31

It’s okay not to be okay ❤️
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HOLA MAXINE - COMO ESTAS ? We quite agree ! Often when people ask us *Como estas Tu ?* we often reply - *Im OK !* when inside we are dying. The next two months are very stressful for us because we*re getting married - buying a House etc etc ! So if anyone asks *Como estas Tu ?* we*ll tell it like it is and hope for a bit of empathy !

Blessings & Peace & Joy always
Amor - Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛

February 16th, 2020 08:17

Ugly
Poetic Dan said:

I felt like this after my nose surgery, very well expressed. True beauty is in the eyes ;)

January 30th, 2020 03:20

Ugly
orchidee said:

Smash that mirror then, and get another one that says \'lovely!\'
But seriously, look in a mirror and say \'I like you\', even \'I love you\'. Seems like madness if having a bad day, but is therapeutic.
I did it with a therapist - hated it at first though.
Meanwhile - surely better than my singing though - so ya can\'t be that bad! heehee.

January 30th, 2020 03:02

Ugly
Goldfinch60 said:

Maxine, The mirror does not show us ourselves as we are, it show a reverse of us so when you look in the mirror ignore the reflection and look further into your heart, that is where your beauty lays and it is shown to us all through your words. You are beautiful.

Andy

January 30th, 2020 02:22

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