Comments received on poems by Maxine Smith



Fail To Suceed!
ron parrish aka wordman said:

inspiration is the driving force in life

May 5th, 2018 21:58

Fail To Suceed!
Sam Cork said:

Another good write my little girl. Never give up. Love you x

May 5th, 2018 18:26

Fail To Suceed!
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good and very true write, we learn so much by our mistakes but it also teaches us to do better as experience cannot be taught.

May 5th, 2018 00:51

Fail To Suceed!
Accidental Poet said:

Excellent positive write Maxine.

May 4th, 2018 21:29

Fail To Suceed!
onepauly said:

now or then
good write.
smile. ha! ha!

May 4th, 2018 19:56

Fail To Suceed!
Lee Renard Caspian said:

Thank you for your poem of encouragement. I think it is a message we all needed to hear. Lovely!

May 4th, 2018 18:21

Fail To Suceed!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MAXINE ~ In my limited experience (35 years) it is only when we FAIL that we can measure success ! In Scientific Research the failures are just as significant as the successes ! The failures teach you what is wrong (so you eliminate them !) and the successes enable you to take another step in the right direction ! We all take stainless steel for granted but our great-grandparents had to polish all their cutlery because it rusted ! In 1912 in Sheffield (UK) Harry Brearley was experimenting with adding different metals to IRON to see if it altered its properties. Some did and some didn\'t ~ he did hundreds of experiments. He gradually increased the % of the added metal. When he added 13% of CHROMIUM he discovered the Chromium / Iron alloy did not rust and STAINLESS STEEL was born ! He did not set out to invent STAINLESS STEEL but by persistence (and lots of experiments) he did ! The MANTRA is: If at first you don\'t succeed ~ try ~ try and try AGAIN ! Thanks for an interesting topic ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA

May 4th, 2018 17:39

Fail To Suceed!
Theta the scholar said:

From under dog to number 1, Very nice poem keep it up Max
-Theta

May 4th, 2018 15:00

Fail To Suceed!
Christina8 said:

A very positive poem! Great job!

May 4th, 2018 14:28

Fail To Suceed!
Michael Edwards said:

Another super write Maxine.

May 4th, 2018 14:20

Fail To Suceed!
Antoinette said:

It\'s nice to read a poem with a good positive message all the way through. Sometimes all the forlorn and heavy poems can be a bit much. This was the perfect antidote to that. It was uplifting and reminds the reader of their own capabilities. Well done

May 4th, 2018 14:19

Fail To Suceed!
Laura said:

Maxine,
A beautifully scripted positive message! Very inspirational! Great pic to accentuate your write! Excellent!

Hugs 🤗
~Laura~

May 4th, 2018 14:04

Fail To Suceed!
orchidee said:

A fine write Maxine.

May 4th, 2018 13:04

Under The Clouds
Gabriella said:

very good I love your writing style

May 4th, 2018 09:40

Under The Clouds
Goldfinch60 said:

Superb positive write Maxine. Yes the clouds only hide the sun which will always be there for us all.

May 4th, 2018 00:42

Under The Clouds
Laura said:

Maxine,
Your strength and judiciousness is praiseworthy! You’re a very perceptive young lady! No matter how dark it gets, you always see the light! That is truly a gift! I thoroughly enjoyed the read!

Hugs 🤗
~Laura~

May 3rd, 2018 19:11

Under The Clouds
Sam Cork said:

Another gem from you baby. Keep them coming. I\'m really enjoying reading the feedback you are getting. X

May 3rd, 2018 18:31

Under The Clouds
Accidental Poet said:

Beautiful write Maxine.

May 3rd, 2018 18:23

Under The Clouds
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing MAXINE ~ Coming form Manchester you know that weatherwise ~ every Cloud has a Silver Lining and Sunshine (and a RAINBOW) after the Storm ~ so it is in LIFE ! In my (35 years) experience too ~ the dark days of Winter always pass to be replaced by the Joy ~ Colour ~ Vitality & Warmth of SPRING ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring ~ Hugs BRIAN

May 3rd, 2018 18:16

Open Shores
stevievize said:

Beautiful poem max very peaceful uplifting poem

May 3rd, 2018 14:51

Under The Clouds
stevievize said:

Great write max it’s true we learn from our past especially the tough times we go through 😘

May 3rd, 2018 14:50

Under The Clouds
orchidee said:

A fine write Maxine.

May 3rd, 2018 14:20

Under The Clouds
Christina8 said:

The rainbow always follows the storm. Wonderful write, Maxine!

May 3rd, 2018 14:10

Under The Clouds
FineB said:

Thank you Maxine.

Poignant, perceptive and superbly vivid.

Good write.

Adversity and overcoming it produces great character in a person.

Keep writing
FineB

May 3rd, 2018 13:49

Under The Clouds
onepauly said:

I believe you are so right.

May 3rd, 2018 13:35

Under The Clouds
Theta the scholar said:

Felt like i was reading it on a cold day, the truest thing is we need hard times to evolve keep up the good work max
-Theta

May 3rd, 2018 13:31

Under The Clouds
Michael Edwards said:

As day follows night - great work Maxine

May 3rd, 2018 12:18

Under The Clouds
Fay Slimm said:

How true these well written words on the need to survive by facing what comes and pass through it to times of more enlightenment. A wonderful read Maxine.

May 3rd, 2018 11:47

Open Shores
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write, those places are so special in life, they will never be forgotten

May 3rd, 2018 00:29

Open Shores
onepauly said:

how do you do it?

May 2nd, 2018 20:38

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