Comments received on poems by Maxine Smith



Karma
Shine said:

Great job with this one!

April 9th, 2018 22:01

What’s A Poem To You?!
LAWLESS said:

Excellent poem. Nice photo.

April 9th, 2018 18:23

What’s A Poem To You?!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MAXINE ~ Poetry should always be from the Heart and not just the Head ! We write a lot on MPS about Structure ~ Haiku ~ Sonnets ~ Villanelles etc ! However Structure is just the shell it is the words and how they are combined and expressed that makes it a real Poem ! The best definition is \"Poetry is WORDS with HEART and written from the HEART !\" Thanks for sharing your HEART once again ~ Love through Love of Poetry ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my poem ~ BIBLES IN HOTELS ~ Thanks for your Poem in my CAR FUSION ~ B

April 9th, 2018 18:21

What’s A Poem To You?!
Sam Cork said:

You really have a natural talent for this my little girl. Keep them coming x

April 9th, 2018 14:37

What’s A Poem To You?!
Just-A-Dude said:

Very expressive writing. Good job.

April 9th, 2018 14:14

What’s A Poem To You?!
stevievize said:

Your poems are so good. You express a lot through your poetry and this shows a greater meaning into what poems are to everyone

April 9th, 2018 14:10

Woodland Retreat
onepauly said:

its the best place to live

April 9th, 2018 14:04

What’s A Poem To You?!
onepauly said:

you are very good at writing poetry
this was one of the best ive read
easy reading. and much meaning


April 9th, 2018 14:01

Life Is So Mundane
LAWLESS said:

It can be hard to get a point across being constrained by rhymes, but you have got past that well. The message is clear, life can be mundane. Hopefully we can mix things up and party like it\'s 1999! You remember Prince, don\'t ya?

April 9th, 2018 12:03

Life Is So Mundane
Maxine Smith said:

I know patience is something I lack lol thank you for your comment hun.

April 9th, 2018 11:51

Life Is So Mundane
marlenawood said:

Being patient pays off yet it\'s so hard lol but it does!! Beautiful writing love

April 9th, 2018 11:09

Left Arm
Maxine Smith said:

Left arm inside poetry fun,
Our friendship shines brighter than the sun.

April 9th, 2018 10:24

Left Arm
stevievize said:

Love this what we did together. Love you my left arm

April 9th, 2018 10:14

Life Is So Mundane
Sam Cork said:

Just loving your stuff xxx

April 9th, 2018 04:22

Life Is So Mundane
Goldfinch60 said:

Each day is special as you are sill alive to see it. Look for the light in each moment - it is there.

April 9th, 2018 02:16

Life Is So Mundane
ella said:

This is relatable,loved it!

April 8th, 2018 19:09

Life Is So Mundane
Ewee_Eyes said:

I love this.

April 8th, 2018 17:34

Life Is So Mundane
RiverJordan said:

Hopefully you\'ll rise like a Phoenix throughout the \"mundaness\". I feel you.

April 8th, 2018 17:06

Life Is So Mundane
stevievize said:

This does seem like life now especially with influences of technology, money, societies pressures. Life goes by and each day seems like the last. Would be good to push through and accomplish more and make life more exciting.

April 8th, 2018 16:36

Starting Again
yellowrose said:

good positive poem . i hate pain .. it just \'\' ruins life \'\' well , that is what i think , maybe because ive been through a lot , for me .. my pain and upset has ruined life.. it takes away any joy you could feel , so hard to find happiness when you feel so hurt inside, i guess like you said you need nice things to hold onto , like your two kids..

April 8th, 2018 16:32

Life Is So Mundane
yellowrose said:

life should be exciitng, i wish it was . you expressed yourself well in this .

April 8th, 2018 16:27

Life Is So Mundane
yellowrose said:

i can relate.. quite often every day will feel like another of \'\' the same day \'\'.. vkind of frustrating , right? of course there are slight differences in each day . i never have anything to look forward to , i get out of bed every day to deal with a mental illness, to be in the house/ garden , walking around the estate , i never have any \'\' plans as such \'\' you just need a complete change sometimes, thats what i crave for , thats what i miss..

April 8th, 2018 16:26

Woodland Retreat
sylviasearcher said:

Yes, beautiful

April 5th, 2018 02:19

Karma
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Great rhyme scheme and rhythm and message too. I simply like this poem lots. Yes our sins will find us out for sure. Thumbs up.


Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"

January 9th, 2018 23:10

Karma
FredPeyer said:

Like the way you treated the subject. Well written. Kudos!

December 22nd, 2017 11:59

Karma
Sam Cork said:

Brilliant - one of your best yet!

December 22nd, 2017 03:37

Karma
Maxine Smith said:

Indeed

December 22nd, 2017 02:43

Starting Again
Goldfinch60 said:

Great positive write. Life is to be enjoyed despite what it may throw at you.

September 6th, 2017 00:52

Starting Again
FredPeyer said:

Way to go girl!
And yes, focus on all the happy things, and you will find that there are a lot more than you originally might have thought. Darkness or depression, or whatever you wanna call it, is a terrible thing. But by concentrating and only seeing the happy things, you will be on your way out of that darkness! I wish you all the BEST! And here is a happy face just for you: :-)

September 5th, 2017 17:30

Minnie Me
Heather T said:

Love that little spitfire that you have described. Cute write!

July 7th, 2017 22:40



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