Comments received on poems by Maxine Smith



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Sam Cork said:

Simple elegant to the point. Love the last 2 lines x

June 10th, 2018 13:12

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Sam Cork said:

Another thumbs up with this one x

June 10th, 2018 13:07

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Sam Cork said:

Our previous little Isabella she reminds me so much of you at that age. Full of fire and determination. The fact you have 2 older brothers never held you back. Beautiful write about the \"weapon of mass destruction\" x

June 10th, 2018 13:06

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Sam Cork said:

Lots of brilliant one liners in this Max. Excellent x

June 10th, 2018 12:50

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stevievize said:

Life is for living my beautiful friend and making memories and starting a new journey is happening.. great message and beautiful write

June 10th, 2018 12:37

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stevievize said:

Very good write max.... love the subject matter of dreams. And the words used are brilliant well done you 😘

June 10th, 2018 12:36

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stevievize said:

Love this Izzy had the most amazing mummy ever. You have so much love for both your children and this comes across in this fantastic write about womd xxx

June 10th, 2018 12:34

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ron parrish aka wordman said:

a creation in progress

June 9th, 2018 22:50

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GON said:

I love this!

June 9th, 2018 21:24

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Lorna said:

Lots of fun and optimism in this poem and all the pictures Maxine!

June 8th, 2018 07:55

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nicolibellamont said:

I love it. very simple. Thank you for sharing

June 8th, 2018 06:05

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

POSITIVE MENTAL ATTITUDE
That sums you up MAXINE !
You are a LADY on my wavelength
We call it POWER OF POSITIVE THINKING !

Thanks for sharing such A Positive Poem \'n Pic ~ Love the Collage of Family & Friends ~ You shed a lot of Light ~ Love & Joy right through MPS ~ while lots of Poems are Gloom & Doom ~ we all LOVE you !
Love the message in your Poem ~ we are all writing a STORY of our life and I like you want mine to be eventful and exciting ~ like your COLLAGE ~ Awesome ! Love the last DOUBLET ~ The End is unwritten ~ Excited to be told ! If we are not excited about the FUTURE MAX ~ we may as well be dead ! Thanks for your comment on my Poem about my TOWN ~ Dead in the day ~ Frenetic @ Night ~ I\'m so glad I\'m under 40 ~ Some Seniors are so Pessimistic about the Future ~ so unlike you and I ! Please check my FUSION on best day of the WEEK ~ Every Blessing ~ Thanks for Being YOU ~ Con Mucho Amor ANGELA y BRIAN ~ Hugs @@@@@@@

June 8th, 2018 05:40

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Michael Edwards said:

Quite a little journey and so well expressed - nice one Maxine.

June 8th, 2018 03:09

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Fay Slimm said:

The concept of making memories and not relying on things for our happiness you bring out so clearly with this lovely collection of family pictures and words which make readers think - - well done again Maxine for reminders of what really counts in our search for a full life.

June 8th, 2018 01:54

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Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Maxine, your children obviously have a wonderful Mum and they give that love back to you in the fun and enjoyment they bring to your life. The wonder of innocence in children is great to see.

June 8th, 2018 00:25

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SLR said:

Love the pics! What a doll! Beautiful baby girl! Thank you for sharing pics of birthday girl! A sweet poem for your sweetheart. Happy birthday for your sugarface! (Btw- doll is because her face is perfect like a doll\'s. Sugarface is because her face makes you want to give her \"sugars\" which is another name for kisses here. Not sure if you have these phrases over there, but just in case, I thought I\'d throw in explanations. :-) :-) :-) )

June 7th, 2018 19:23

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI MAXINE ~ Thanks for a wonderful Acrostic ~ ISABELLA ~ She is just as beautiful as her MAMMA ~ you are right to be very proud ! Love the Centre Photo ~ very self assured ~ I love Rock & Roll and Hard Rock Cafes ~ Great Memorabilia ~ all over the World always great Coffee & Cookies ! It is La Bella Isabella in Spanish as well ~ which is Mine & Angela\'s second language so we wish her Feliz Cinco Cumpleanos ~ Happy Fifth Birthday for your perfect Daughter Isabella ~ You have every right to be very very proud ! I hope to have at least two kids of my own before I am 40 and thankfully Angela wants to start a Family asap after we are married ! We SKYPE each other every day ~ but its a poor substitute for Cheek to Cheek ! Lovely to have you back and the ISABELLA ACROSTIC is a real bonus ! MUCHOS GRACIAS ~ Three hugs ~ One for You and One each for Your lovely Children ~ ANGELA & BRIAN @@@

June 7th, 2018 18:49

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Laura said:

Maxine,
I love your acrostic and
collage of your beautiful
daughter...ISABELLA!

La Bella Isabella...
Italian for...
The Beautiful Isabella!
She’s an...
INCREDIBLY, ZESTY,
ZIPPY, YOUNG...lady!


I wish her a very Happy Birthday!
πŸ˜˜πŸŽ‰πŸŽˆπŸŽŠπŸŽˆπŸŽπŸ°πŸ¦πŸ­β€οΈ
Enjoy the birthday celebration!

Lots of hugs πŸ€— and kisses 😘...

~Laura~

P.S.-Thank you for sharing all the pics!
She’s a beauty...just like her Mum!😊






June 7th, 2018 10:30

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orchidee said:

A fine write and pics Maxine.

June 7th, 2018 10:03

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Fay Slimm said:

Five year old and full of innocent beauty - dear little bringer of life and happiness to a caring and loving Mum - have a great birthday as a family together and thank you for sharing those delightful pictures dear Maxine.


June 7th, 2018 09:33

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Lorna said:

I love Isabella lower right picture looking very grumpy indeed - waiting for cake!

June 7th, 2018 08:50

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Michael Edwards said:

I melt when it comes to children (for all the right reasons) and she looks adorable - give her a big hug from me.

June 7th, 2018 08:46

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Michael Edwards said:

Welcome back and what an up-lifting read - your children are truly blessed to have such a loving caring mother and a great acrostic to go with it. Happy birthday Isabella.

June 7th, 2018 08:45

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nicolibellamont said:

Beautiful. I love how you use rewind to the finish and fast forward to the beginning in opposition. In my mind that symbolizes a cycle, returning back on itself. Very well thought out.

May 22nd, 2018 05:57

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SLR said:

Hope you don\'t mind that I screen shot it for later. Very sweetly sexy. Great write. Glad mine came out fine, I\'m technologically disabled and would never have been able to get it translated.

May 21st, 2018 22:16

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dusk arising said:

It\'s said that one sure sign of depression is the need to spend too many daylight hours in bed asleep. Is it any wonder when the worlds you mind can create in dreams is so much nicer than the real world.
I discovered i am a lucid dreamer which doesn\'t help.

May 21st, 2018 18:04

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Fay Slimm said:

A place of no rules where we play out our dreams - - love the sense of fancy in this write Maxine -- very well styled is the title too. Great read.

May 21st, 2018 13:24

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kingOfOne said:

This mind set is key to success.. love it! Life isn\'t easy but if it was, we wouldn\'t have art. Keep it up pretty lady!

May 21st, 2018 11:06

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanx for sharing MAX ~ fortunately I have a friend who lives in HYROGLYPH (great place for a Holiday !) so he was able to translate for me ! My DAD speaks Greek so I have no trouble with these cryptic poems ! Lovely Love Acrostic on KISS ! Yes my experience too ! Sips of heaven\'s bliss ~ Spirit of lust unveils ~ Serenity in Love ~ Ocean of purist sin ! And that\'s just a KISS ~ WOW thanks fr caring & sharing ~ I can see why MPS put into CODE MODE ~ You could have given STEVE (orchidee) a fatal heart attack ~ with JUST ONE KISS ! Yours as ever ABBRACCI e BACI ~ BRIAN XOX Please visit SUMMER HOLIDAYS ~ B !

May 21st, 2018 05:11

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD MORNING ~ MAXINE ~ Bitter ~ Sweet is a lovely OXYMORON (contradictory term) and yet it describes so many of life\'s experiences ~ especially LOVE ~ but also DREAMS as your perfect poem exemplifies ! Love the prelude ~ YES ~ There are no rules in Dreaming !
Love the language in the poem in the poem ~ the structure and the vibrancy of the internal rhyme !

Silence cries ~ Grounded sky\'s
Fall as we rise ~ Truth in the lies

Surreal so real
Broken as we heal

Raindrops so dry
Soothing in silence we cry
The morning\'s night it seems
In my bitter sweet dreams !

It is the fragmentation of verse that makes the poem so surreal and perfect to recite ~ I am a performance Poet ~ thanks for sharing your Dreams ! You might like to visit SUMMER HOLIDAY it is very refreshing ! Yours as always ~ Hugs BRIAN @@@@@@@


May 21st, 2018 04:38



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