Comments received on poems by Maxine Smith



BitterSweetDreams
orchidee said:

A fine write Maxine.

May 21st, 2018 02:10

BitterSweetDreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Didn\'t have to translate this one.

May 21st, 2018 01:01

BitterSweetDreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, dreams can be wonderfully meaningless.

May 21st, 2018 00:58

BitterSweetDreams
Michael Edwards said:

Love the introduction - there\'s a haiku in it somewhere.

May 21st, 2018 00:35

BitterSweetDreams
Michael Edwards said:

Surreal so real - I wish I\'d written that - a bit of magic in a super piece of writing.

May 21st, 2018 00:34

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Goldfinch60 said:

I too had hieroglyphics and had to translate it -it was well worth it.

May 21st, 2018 00:31

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LAWLESS said:

The original sin is a bunch of crap in my opinion. A kiss is wonderful, as you aptly explained in this fine poem.

Heaven\'s bliss can be found in many things, especially this I.P.A. I\'m drinking!

Hieroglyphics? I believe dudes like Hood are to blame. He lives!

May 20th, 2018 17:00

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stevievize said:

Lovely poem very good write max

May 20th, 2018 15:02

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Maxine Smith said:

Lol happy you managed to read it also Orchidee, thanks for stopping by 😀

May 20th, 2018 11:07

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orchidee said:

Something in the formatting of some poems. I got hieroglyphics too! Now Michael\'s translated it, I\'ve swooned at the second line - I would! lol.

May 20th, 2018 10:41

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Michael Edwards said:


Came up in hieroglyphics and had to pop it into google translate to read it (see below). So pleased I took the trouble - a great write Maxine....................................


Kind, delightful, sweet sips of heavens bliss

Idyllic spirit of lust unveils

Sunshine, serenity, in love, we live

Swim in our ocean of the purest sin

May 20th, 2018 09:45

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Laura said:

Maxine,
An awesome acrostic!
A favorite form of mine...
as you probably know!
Love the pic ❤️
PERFECTION

Hugs 🤗
~Laura~

May 20th, 2018 09:37

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RiverJordan said:

zestfully bursting nostalgia! great, lol

May 19th, 2018 14:25

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Mj_santos said:

You know its a good poem when you feel refreshed. Great work

May 17th, 2018 11:26

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E-Poems said:

This put a smile on my face, such lovely writing as always! I have an instant craving for them rainbow sticks full of sugar? haha. ~E

May 14th, 2018 11:39

Under The Clouds
E-Poems said:

Love this one Maxine! Lovely write.

May 14th, 2018 11:38

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ron parrish aka wordman said:

sounds like a little bliss

May 14th, 2018 08:20

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Lorna said:

So many smiles this one created! Lovely and fun!

May 14th, 2018 06:42

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Goldfinch60 said:

Super positive write.

\"Smile, it confuses people\"

May 14th, 2018 00:52

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SLR said:

So sweet, lyrical and light. Lovely! Inject with zest, endeavor to exude? You certainly have! Thank you! You\'ve definitely made my day a little brighter.

May 13th, 2018 21:20

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Michael Edwards said:

Your work improves with every posting - - superbly crafted Maxine

May 13th, 2018 15:15

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orchidee said:

A fine write Maxine.

May 13th, 2018 12:20

We Don’t Ever Really Know
MillyT said:

That is our human tragedy, always thinking the worse outcome. I really liked this introspective process, we don’t always have the right perspective though.

May 13th, 2018 12:12

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stevievize said:

Haha road trip road trip 😂

May 13th, 2018 11:58

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stevievize said:

Very good poem max it’s always good to smile 😊

May 13th, 2018 11:54

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Laura said:

Maxine,
An awesome acrostic! One of my favorite structures! Reading it certainly put a smile on my face!
Actually, whenever I see your smiling face, it automatically makes me smile! You’re very beautiful!

Hugs 🤗
~Laura~

May 13th, 2018 11:35

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW MAXINE ~ Love acrostics and this one ticks all the boxes ! You have a perfect SMILE and I love all your pictures ! I especially love line four because your photos are always so full of Love\'s promises !

Lips pursed, then we burst, into the bliss we kiss !

This is doubly beautiful physically for the action
Linguistically for the double internal rhyme !

Thanks for Caring & Sharing
Hugs ~ Angela & Brian XOX

May 13th, 2018 10:36

Innocent Couplets
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write, if only that innocence could last a lifetime.

May 13th, 2018 01:43

Innocent Couplets
orchidee said:

A lovely write and pic Maxine.

May 13th, 2018 01:22

Innocent Couplets
Michael Edwards said:

The simplicity and beauty of a child\'s drawing - oh if we could draw like that as adults. Picasso is reputed as saying it took him a short while to learn to draw but a lifetime to learn to draw like a child.

As for the couplets they are just perfect - you are a natural at writing them - do keep writing them Maxine.

May 12th, 2018 23:33



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