Comments received on poems by Sammertheone



Heard it but never felt it...until now.
FredPeyer said:

Again, a very strong, emotional poem. In the last line, \'....than the woman I was\' you use the past tense. Are you stronger now?

August 5th, 2017 22:46

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FredPeyer said:

You express the pain and longing perfectly. Good writing!

August 5th, 2017 22:44