Comments received on poems by tytkettle
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Ethan said:
\"Said the man in his throne
To his group of Roman friends\" is a very nice touch. However, your wording almost makes it seem as though the Roman man had been speaking the whole time. Was that intended?
June 4th, 2017 13:14
Ethan said:
\"Said the man in his throne
To his group of Roman friends\" is a very nice touch. However, your wording almost makes it seem as though the Roman man had been speaking the whole time. Was that intended?
June 4th, 2017 13:14