Comments received on poems by Anonymous Human



Oxygen
L. B. Mek said:

\'Tell me how to make the pressure lighter\'
\'To resist the voices that overlap\'
\'To make those memories not (*gate) crash\'
\'Those desperate gasps for air\'..
so immersive in wording, a great read!
thanks for sharing

May 24th, 2021 06:18

Fight, Flight, Freeze
Christina8 said:

Oh, A.H., this is a deeply personal account and you are so strong to share. Thanks for sharing. The last line is just such a strong statement!! I have experienced that even in my own life. Thanks again!

November 21st, 2020 20:23

Fight, Flight, Freeze
RDS said:

Ah, dear Ario a very graphic and organic unwrapping of something deeply personal. From which you have picked up a pearl of resilience that will continue to glisten as the scars will surely fade. Thank you for sharing this

November 21st, 2020 16:36

Four Walls
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Alicia, your poem provides a great service by the way. Thank you for writing about these symptoms in your poem. I also found these sites that may be a little closer to home (but I encourage readers to still visit NAMI, they run an exceptional site) and might be better for anyone reading your poem and living in the United Kingdom:

mentalhealth.org.uk
mind.org.uk

Cheers, peace, and blessings!

June 20th, 2017 13:15

Four Walls
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Thanks for the clarification. It makes your poem all the more instructive for someone whom may be wondering what it is like to suffer from the debilitating and constricting effects of mental illness. Of course there\'s plenty of help available for both the one suffering and for their family members: NAMI is dedicated to building better lives for those who face mental illness every day.

June 20th, 2017 12:59

Four Walls
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Are you or the \'first person\' character in your poem suffering with a permanent disability that limits mobility?

June 19th, 2017 22:38

Four Walls
onepauly said:

I made an error that last
comment. sometimes those four walls have a reason
do you know what it is?

June 19th, 2017 17:05