Comments received on poems by Cyprian Van Dyke



Court On High Seas
Nicholas Browning said:

You use some very abstract imagery. It\'s good stuff once again from our good sir Van Dyke.
This was, once again, worthwhile to read because of that strange title that implores you to give it a read. Bravo, keep it up.

July 14th, 2017 12:47

Court On High Seas
magenta1 said:

I rode the waves with you and felt the sting of the salt air

July 14th, 2017 10:19

Court On High Seas
ShannonXx said:

A lovely write

July 14th, 2017 07:28

Grandfather\'s Story
malubotelho said:

For me the moral of the story here is that you have to stop being chickened out and go to speak to your woman. In another words, go for it.

July 12th, 2017 20:47

The Violin (the personification)
malubotelho said:

Her hair is,

Soft as the wind,

Straight as the strings

Of a violin.
I love this verse and you are showing me a great writer. Thank you. You are good as it can be.

July 12th, 2017 20:29

Grandfather\'s Story
Heather T said:

I don\'t see any chickens here! Lovely.

July 12th, 2017 19:35

Grandfather\'s Story
P.H.Rose said:

Wow, what a poem,
Or have j just read
A story.... it doesn\'t
Matter as either way
It was brilliant......

July 12th, 2017 16:44

The Violin (the personification)
Candlewitch said:

I completely agree with Nicholas... couldn\'t have said it any better!

*hugs, Cat

July 10th, 2017 10:41

The Violin (the personification)
Nicholas Browning said:

What made this worthwhile to read? Are you insane? Why, the personification of a violin of course! Who does that? Wanna know who? You do! Haha, you\'re crazy, and so is this. Crazy inspirational. Good show, chap, good show.

July 10th, 2017 10:19

To Remind
malubotelho said:

Very beautiful poem. Very soft the way you wrote it. I felt soft, light and free even though it is a bit sad.

July 7th, 2017 09:39

To Remind
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 6th, 2017 10:35

To Remind
Nicholas Browning said:

It sounds to me as if there was a loved one who either left the narrator by breaking off a relationship, or by the sudden occurrence of death. Whichever it may be, I decided to read this because of the title. It caught my eye. Whatever the case may be of the poem\'s moral, the last line of this wonderfully simple yet emotionally complex work was the hook, line and sinker. Well done sir.

July 6th, 2017 10:04

Her Perfume
Heather T said:

Ahh, the naked finger...perhaps one would continue to follow her like a blood hound with a degree in aromachology? Nothing like a signature scent to make one memorable.

June 28th, 2017 23:18

Her Perfume
malubotelho said:

Lovely romantic and sensorial poem. I want to know what scent is that.

June 28th, 2017 14:29