Comments received on poems by AmandaJade



Angels Wings
SmoothPoetry said:

Good write, and a shared light, sleep tight, and goodnight

April 8th, 2019 02:27

Walking On Heroin Needles
Nicholas Browning said:

This read was really nice. The last stanza was pretty cool I thought.
Best regards.

March 20th, 2019 21:09

Blackened Fog.
psychofemale said:

Love this one, the last stanza was brilliant

February 7th, 2019 19:03

Poison of Humanity.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANK YOU FOR SHARING AMANDA ~ You have covered a sad (but all too often) experience in this elegant but tragic Poem ! My Mother taught me to always treat Young Ladies (especially VIRGINS) with the greatest respect. Many MEN dont apreciate just how \"valuable\" a Young Lady\'s VIRGINITY is ! She can only give it ONCE and it should be in a Loving & Stable relationship and certainly not in a sordid encounter with an Older Predatory Man who just \"Comes & then Goes !\". Leaving the Lady hurt physically and damaged psychologically ! A MALE gains prestige (and experience) when HE loses HIS VIRGINITY a Lady loses something mystical which can never be recovered. It should only be in a loving stable relationship. Im 35 and I have never made love to a Lady against her will. ANGELA was not a Virgin when I met her (she was 28) but i always treated her as if she was ! She is from a Good Catholic Family and I would not wish her to be pregnant at the Altar !
Verse 1. Is flattery ~ Older Men are good at that V 2. Is seduction ~ tearing away the layers of restraint ! V 3. Is a point of no return ~ Man will not be denied ! V 4. Over and Out ! Sometimes I am ashamed to be a MAN ? V 5. The dire condition of the ABUSED which the ABUSER did not stay to see ~ DAMN HIM ! If this is autobiographical please accept my commiserations ~ time does heal but not completely ! If it is allogorical let it be a warning to ALL MALE MEMBERS irrespective of age ! Im 35 so it hit hard ! Every blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check our site ~ ANGELA is my Fiancee and currently on a Work exchange in NEW ZEALAND 11,500 miles from London !

January 13th, 2019 10:58

Sexual Identification.
Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33) said:

This is absolutely superb....It kept my FULL attention from the first word to the last...and the amount of content that you actually covered was amazingly done...I, myself, am a gay \"man\", but I have always identified with a female role since I was a little kid...Now, half way through my life, I have experienced just about everything in the gay world..so, I plan to have the operation to become a full on female...I have the fashion sense, and I CAN ALREADY EWALK IN MY HEELS...ll I am also a performer...I sing, dance, etc...anhyway, enough about me...back to you...This was absolutely brilliant...one of the best I have read on this site over the past 2 years....please keep writing and posting...I would love to hear more from you with that kind of range...xxxooo

January 3rd, 2019 05:30

Sexual Identification.
kevin browne said:

Ah, it\'s time to dance, it\'s time for romance. Brilliantly expressed between the covers of love. Our hearts lead the way to whoever it you fall in love with. Sexual preferences are interesting and bravely committed to fimish the dance. Great writing.

January 2nd, 2019 21:04

Sexual Identification.
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Powerful &
Beautiful poem!
😊✌

January 2nd, 2019 20:51

Self Healing.
GON said:

brilliant image

December 23rd, 2018 23:46

Anxiety Attack
orchidee said:

It won\'t be so every night and/or every day, will it? Hope not. A fine write describing anxiety amandajane.

September 21st, 2018 01:42

When You Passed Away
Clark said:

You truly have one of the most beautiful souls I have ever had the honor of encountering. This is an incredible write. My heart goes out to you and your family.

August 14th, 2018 22:27

oh, how sad it is
Yorelzinala said:

\"Pushes you into hells fires from which you have ran.\" This part made me sense that there is strength among your words.

Run no more; rise like the phoenix from the ashes and keep writing.

Wonderful poem!

August 9th, 2018 21:45

oh, how sad it is
sjc513 said:

Touched my heart your work is beautiful.

June 28th, 2018 09:59

oh, how sad it is
Heartwriter said:

Such a sad write. I hope you can get the protection and the care you need.

June 27th, 2018 15:06

oh, how sad it is
doesntmatter said:

Beautifully wrote. I hope you figure out all of your troubles because a beautiful heart lies within.

June 27th, 2018 14:23

Pressed Against Walls
Unsub said:

Amanda,

i always hold back offering help as I understand that this is a poem; & may be simply a poem drawn from someonelse\'s experience ( I hope so in this case)

Looking at it from a poetic point of view; the imagery is graphic; well explored. the structure & delivery is spot on & makes for an uncomfortable read because of the theme but a excellent poem on its own.

If you are suffering then do take doesntmatter\'s advice.

If need be I\'ll pop round with tepo & GON & sort this vile creature out.

Take care & keep up this superb style of poetry.

Unsub.

June 27th, 2018 07:18

Pressed Against Walls
doesntmatter said:

If you are a victim to abuse please get help. This was a beautiful poem produced by a beautiful mind and heart. You deserve better than them. Please stay safe

June 26th, 2018 21:17

Dad\'s Car Crash
SLR said:

It\'s heart wrenching to both love and hate someone. To feel a kind of relief when something happens that prevents than from hurting us anymore. And then feel guilty for feeling relief. Powerful post.

May 15th, 2018 22:34

Buttered Popcorn
FredPeyer said:

Amanda, I do like the \'phantom\' metaphor, it so well represents that lost love which still lingers, like a ghost. Very well written, kudos!

January 7th, 2018 11:48

Apple Cheeks
vermahl said:

The words flow into a beautiful picture for me, well done.

January 5th, 2018 11:47

Apple Cheeks
FredPeyer said:

Absolutely beautiful, Amanda!

January 5th, 2018 11:23

Her Lipstick on My Lips
FredPeyer said:

Beautifully written, Amanda!

December 30th, 2017 20:31

Your Laugh\'s Hiss
FredPeyer said:

Amanda, after reading this my breathing stopped! An incredible write. Straight from the soul.

November 29th, 2017 03:55

What I Realized About My Parents
FredPeyer said:

Amanda, your incredible poem should be \'must reading\' for any new parents! It does not sound like a childhood, it sounds like a nightmare. I sincerely hope you will be able to leave these terrible memories behind and look forward to a life filled with love and happiness!

November 27th, 2017 20:45

What I Realized About My Parents
JC said:

This poem has emotional impact, and I felt it was a well written expression of angst. I think it is a good sign that you recognize how messed up things were, and hopefully you have worked through it. Thank you for sharing.

November 26th, 2017 08:10

What I Realized About My Parents
Esther J. Doucet said:

Vulnerability is courage and you show much in sharing your experiences...

November 26th, 2017 01:15

I Have Become Deafened
FredPeyer said:

Wow, Amanda, I just love EVERY line. This has got to be a favorite! And it can so easily be turned around to talk about the words I never said.
This is what poetry is all about. Very well done! Kudos!

November 18th, 2017 21:19

A Normality of Pain and Blood
FredPeyer said:

Amanda, you wrote a raw and to the point poem. I am not sure if it is aimed at your mother, but it does show something so important in any relationship: We do not listen enough!

November 9th, 2017 19:47

A Grease Flower Crown
WL Schuett said:

A cool poem you have captured the feelings of this person . Well done keep writing

October 10th, 2017 07:54

A Grease Flower Crown
FredPeyer said:

Love your poem, Amanda!
It is so full of hope and longing, and telling us that no matter what our station in life is, there is hope and we can dream.
Very well written!

October 9th, 2017 13:05

What My Mother Taught Me
WL Schuett said:

That\'s a lovely poem , well done !

September 1st, 2017 06:49

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