Comments received on poems by Candlewitch



Desperation
Sefrin said:

These words can reach the very soul. Powerful!

October 13th, 2017 13:17

Desperation
FredPeyer said:

Cat, you are saying a lot with these few lines. So sorry you had to go through this experience. Unfortunately it is a picture that is endlessly repeated all over the world.

October 13th, 2017 12:01

Desperation
Mugsdaddy said:

Such a sad situation but you are so much stronger for it.
Mugs

October 13th, 2017 10:52

Desperation
Fay Slimm. said:

Powerful words Cat - a young women\'s abandonment at a time when care was needed makes these few lines drip with pathos and when a mother feels helpless in hunger\'s grip desperation must really set in. Terrible trauma comes to the fore in your unforgettable poem my friend.

October 13th, 2017 10:28

Desperation
Louis Gibbs said:

Bitter memory, expressed with compassion for former self, Cat! Congratulations for overcoming! Powerful poem.

October 13th, 2017 10:12

Autumnal Ball
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write, autumn dance is such a wonderfully colourful time in the year - my favourite season.

October 11th, 2017 00:51

Autumnal Ball
Christina8 said:

Superb imagery, love this poem, Cat! *hugs*

October 10th, 2017 16:51

Autumnal Ball
Azura Nightsong said:

beautiful imagery, I do love fall so much. Even though its been way too hot this year.

October 10th, 2017 13:12

Autumnal Ball
WL Schuett said:

There\'s definitely something special about autumn and your poem captures that spirit

October 10th, 2017 13:11

Autumnal Ball
FredPeyer said:

Your poem makes Fall come alive, Cat! Beautifully crafted.
I love Halloween too...the only time of the year I don\'t have to wear a mask! :-)

October 10th, 2017 12:53

Autumnal Ball
Louis Gibbs said:

My favorite season, portrayed well in this poem, Cat. Enjoyed!

October 10th, 2017 10:24

Shade Of My Shadow by: eddy styx & Hood
Goldfinch60 said:

Super dark write from you both. You must remember though the clock is ticking for you.
Tick......
Tock.....
Tic.......
Toc......
Ti.......
To.......
T........
T........
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October 10th, 2017 00:30

Shade Of My Shadow by: eddy styx & Hood
FredPeyer said:

This is an exquisite co-write, yes, it is dark, but beautifully written, and so true. Non of us can escape this shadow!
Great, great poem!

October 9th, 2017 20:47

Shade Of My Shadow by: eddy styx & Hood
orchidee said:

I\'ll haunt ya - you\'ll know it\'s me. I\'ll be singing. Meooowwooo! lol

October 9th, 2017 10:11

Consumed with: Santita & Hood
Goldfinch60 said:

Very dark write but it had me hooked.

October 9th, 2017 00:39

Consumed with: Santita & Hood
malubotelho said:

A beautiful expression of murder and horror. An essay for Halloween I suppose. Great collaboration between the three of you.

October 8th, 2017 19:27

Reprisal (by: eddy styx)
Goldfinch60 said:

Reprisal is the name of the game today, eddy and Hood should get together to plan their revenges.

October 3rd, 2017 01:24

Reprisal (by: eddy styx)
malubotelho said:

This is great dark and genius. Applause to Eddy.

October 2nd, 2017 18:09

Reprisal (by: eddy styx)
Fay Slimm. said:

A telling word you chose chose for the title dear Cat - love some of the phrasing which shoots from your lines of dark retaliation.

October 2nd, 2017 16:30

Reprisal (by: eddy styx)
Louis Gibbs said:

\"the touch of her gaze\" ... \"a swift kick in my smoldering pride\" ... brilliant lines, Cat! Love this one.

October 2nd, 2017 11:34

Reprisal (by: eddy styx)
rrodriguez said:

dark indeed.... wow, fine description of reprisal...

October 2nd, 2017 11:00

Awakening
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful sensual loving write Cat.

September 30th, 2017 01:04

Awakening
WL Schuett said:

This is a beautiful poem lovely to read , sensual, yet innocent, good work

September 29th, 2017 19:41

Awakening
lasergraph said:

Sensual but sweet. Got a little flush.

September 29th, 2017 15:49

Awakening
Tony36 said:

Beautifully Written

September 29th, 2017 13:22

Awakening
Simple-Man87 said:

Very nice. Great start to my day reading something so sensual. Thank you for sharing.

September 29th, 2017 13:00

Awakening
malubotelho said:

Yes, what a gem. So sweet and delightful. You can be versatile on your work. Love this.

September 29th, 2017 12:42

Awakening
Christina8 said:

I love this sensual poem! Wonderful description throughout. Absolutely beautiful! hugs--Christina

September 29th, 2017 12:12

Awakening
FredPeyer said:

Cat, this beautiful poem brought to mind the picture of an innocent girl growing into a beautiful, yet still innocent woman. The \'rosebud of desire\' growing into a beautiful full fledged rose.
Beautiful writing, perfect choice of words!

September 29th, 2017 11:53

Awakening
Fay Slimm. said:

A ballad with lots of sensuous meaning - - loved the imagery too Cat.

September 29th, 2017 11:10

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