Comments received on poems by Candlewitch



Awakening
Louis Gibbs said:

I think I\'m in love with this delightful damsel, and love your poem describing her awakening! Well done, Cat!

September 29th, 2017 10:39

Midnight Confessions by: Santita & eddy styx
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a wonderful write, it pulled me into it from the first line. Has eddy got his comeuppance?
This goes into favourites!

September 28th, 2017 00:53

Midnight Confessions by: Santita & eddy styx
Christina8 said:

Wow, you guys work really well together...great twist at the end! Perfect chemistry! 5 stars! Again, really well done!

September 27th, 2017 20:34

Midnight Confessions by: Santita & eddy styx
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhhhhh EDDY ~ I\'ll forgive you. You set out to ravage and sacrifice the Beautiful Santita and MPS would have lost its finest treasure. BUT ~ just like she has captivated us all ~ no Man could resist her enchanting eyes ~ her seductive lips ~ her rhythmic pulsating hips drawing you towards her throbbing Mound of Venus. EDDY Your blood thirst was defeated and replaced by the LUST which SHE desired to drain you of your Erotic Energy for HER PLEASURE ! You did what any REAL MAN would have done ! You dropped your CHOPPER and instead of dismembering Her you fully satisfied her with your PORK SWORD instead ! When you came and lay exhausted & defeated she stood naked and triumphant over you and anointed you with her precious HONEY ! Thanks for caring Love & Hugs & Kisses for CAT & SANTI XOXOX and a BOOOOOOO for EDDY ~ BRIAN El Hombre D\'ORO

September 27th, 2017 13:37

Midnight Confessions by: Santita & eddy styx
Simple-Man87 said:

Whoa. You guys... Whoa. This was amazing. I was literally at the edge of my seat. My imagination played every scene as if I was watching a movie. Very well done.

September 27th, 2017 12:45

Midnight Confessions by: Santita & eddy styx
FredPeyer said:

This is not an 18+, this is a 70+!
Each one of you is an incredible writer, but together you are awesome!

September 27th, 2017 12:41

Midnight Confessions by: Santita & eddy styx
orchidee said:

What\'s going on here?! heehee. And what would I know about it?! Swoon!

September 27th, 2017 11:00

Come September
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Cat, the person you see is not the real you, the real you is inside you and is seen within the eyes, the eyes show the soul and the beauty of each of us.

September 27th, 2017 00:42

Come September
Accidental Poet said:

I have to agree Cat, the young girl is there and radiates through you as beautiful as ever. ; )

September 26th, 2017 20:23

Come September
malubotelho said:

Look Cat, I\'ve changed my profile picture to a young version of me. I was 23 here. This is the girl.

September 26th, 2017 17:50

Come September
malubotelho said:

Dear Cat. Lovely write and what a question. I have a trick that I do most of the time I look at a mirror. I stand there and I see myself as a beautiful woman that has no age. A woman that remains the same. I look at my face and body and see only perfection. But I understand when you say where is the girl that lives on our mind. If I look at the mirror without thinking I feel like I\'m looking at somebody else. It is because the girl that lives inside me do not recognize the woman she sees in the mirror. This is why them I stop there and fusion the too me together to cancel that image because who I truly am can not be reflected in a simple mirror.

September 26th, 2017 16:05

Come September
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah the girl inside is nowhere to found in a mirror dear Cat - - your verse brings poignancy to the passing of time.

September 26th, 2017 14:47

Come September
WL Schuett said:

A Very powerful introspective poem love it you have stuck a chord here ... a very fine poem

September 26th, 2017 14:17

Come September
FredPeyer said:

Cat, this is such a beautiful and insightful poem about aging and about the difference between reality and how we see ourselves in our minds.

And btw, I found out how not to age anymore: I don\'t look in the mirror!!!

September 26th, 2017 12:46

Come September
chinaaliciarivera said:

I like this, this is interesting. It makes me think of a person looking in the mirror reflecting on the past and the present and getting older and making an effort to appreciate aging. :)

September 26th, 2017 12:41

Come September
Christina8 said:

I really like this introspective write! Trying to find the girl within the woman--fantastic!--Christina

September 26th, 2017 11:30

Come September
Louis Gibbs said:

\"Who is this person in the mirror, and what have you done with me!\" Know the feeling, Cat. Well done!

September 26th, 2017 11:28

Toys? by:eddy styx
Goldfinch60 said:

The seduction never ends eddy, the batteries ensure the battle continues.

September 26th, 2017 01:00

Toys? by:eddy styx
malubotelho said:

What about poke the doll eyes. Who never did it? I did and cried after. Felt sorry. If Eddy could see me he would feel great.

September 25th, 2017 19:40

Toys? by:eddy styx
dusk arising said:

Eddy, you\'re my kinda guy..... lets go rip the stuffing outta some teddy bears and pull dolls hair today, i\'m feeling mean.

September 25th, 2017 18:06

Toys? by:eddy styx
FredPeyer said:

That eddy is one heck of a kinky guy! But I just love to read about him.
Great job!

September 25th, 2017 17:54

Toys? by:eddy styx
Azura Nightsong said:

How dark and twisted, I love it!
Sincerely, Azura

September 25th, 2017 13:31

Toys? by:eddy styx
Christina8 said:

Very good write about Toys! As long as you have the batteries, the fun never ends! Wickedly fun and seductive write! Hugs-Christina

September 25th, 2017 10:56

Toys? by:eddy styx
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks EDDY ~ With TOYS ~ Who need BOYS ? Boo to EDDY and A RABBIT for You CAT Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX

September 25th, 2017 10:08

Medusa Betrayed
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write and interpretation Cat.

September 25th, 2017 00:38

Medusa Betrayed
dusk arising said:

So there i was, practicing a couple of tunes on my snake charmers pipe and along you come with this. OK so im gonna practice more tilliii can charm the snakes off beauties head - then im of to the cave. Appetite whetted. Thanks Cat.

September 24th, 2017 17:31

Medusa Betrayed
malubotelho said:

Great write Cat. Medusa was trick indeed. There still you can find medusas on personification. We all have to confront it sometimes.

September 24th, 2017 17:12

Medusa Betrayed
lasergraph said:

A great job. Mythology was never stated so eloquently.

September 24th, 2017 14:28

Medusa Betrayed
Christina8 said:

I like this classic story that you made your own! Very nice, indeed!

September 24th, 2017 11:26

Medusa Betrayed
orchidee said:

Naughty old Poseidon. His ship sunk in a film, didn\'t it?! lol.

September 24th, 2017 11:19



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